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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From Clairvoyant on September 07, 2009
    Yes, yes, yes! All loose ends tied up. Jake ends up with Draco. Ornery Tink still smoking in the gardens. Severus and Hermione are living happily ever after with their unruly children, and giving some loving back to the wizarding world.

    This was an utterly amazing epic. You know the best part? Come closer so I can whisper the answer in your ear... not only did I get hours of reading enjoyment from this story, but I made a friend. AV, you are funny, intelligent, thoughtful, sassy and sweet, and it shines through in your quality writing. Woot and squee to nth degree!!! Bravo!!!
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  • From voraciousreader on September 07, 2009
    As they say: 'AAAAWWWWW!' perfect ending, I think. I laughed at Tink being the only elf left, you'd think Severus' self-preservation instinct would have meant he kept at least a couple of them for nappy duty!
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  • From Amethystique on September 07, 2009
    I have only 1 word for this epic......STUNNING!!!
    Onwards to the next.
    Blessings
    Amethystique xxx
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  • From Clairvoyant on September 06, 2009
    I read this on Thursday, then forgot to review. Bad Clairvoyant!

    Severus is too funny, already thinking about triplet Gryffindors. What a fatalist.

    I like how you put the sexy!shower to use for sex! Lemony scented, indeed.

    Can't wait to see the epilogue to see how life turns out for all my faves: Jake and Tink included.

    I'm sad to see this end, but this has been such an excellent, thought-provoking, funny, sexy, epic story. What will the mind of ApollinaV churn out next?
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  • From winter748 on September 05, 2009
    Wonderful job. It was perfect. I've really enjoyed this story. It had humor, angst, romance, sex and plain craziness. Not to mention the author (that's you!) could spell, put a sentence together, keep the characterization consistent, and wrote believable dialogue. You should be proud. Lots of hugs, kisses and chocolate!
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  • From LynnHall on September 05, 2009
    'Hermione now understood why fairy tales ended with a kiss."

    I love the truisms you have written throughout this story and how you go about exploring what they mean to each character. Absolutely fabulous writing.
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  • From Monddame on September 05, 2009
    Hi!
    Just came across this today and read...the whooole thing. Whew.
    And it is fantastic. I found myself laughing so often at your little descriptions and sarcastic wit. And the plot/psychology of the thing is spectacular. I find that relationship motivation is the most lacking aspect of most SS/HG fics, but your premise and its execution are wholly believable. And for some reason, I can completely see Hermione developing a chemical dependence.
    Plus, Jake was so amusing. It made me rethink my position on Hufflepuffs.
    Marvelous, indeed. So I thought I'd let you know that I've put this on my 'Recommended Readings', and tell you how much I supremely enjoyed this story. Good work!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 04, 2009
    Excellent. I can't wait to read the epilogue to this wonderful story. I think it would be great if Hermione did end up having triplets, but not all girls. I think she should have two girls and one boy. Update soon.
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  • From LadyofClunn on September 04, 2009
    Wonderful, wonderful wonderful!

    I love Severus' worst case scenario technique, I'll have to try it.

    I wonder whether the triplets will make an appearance in the epilogue?

    What a journey! I am so glad you took us along on the ride!
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  • From rini868 on September 04, 2009
    AV! You're back!!!! I hope everything's alright...

    Lol! Sev is trying to look for pregnancy? After just a night?

    Yay! Thumbs up for no guilt or shame!!!

    I love it how he's just convinced himself that they're going to have triplets. I think Hermione would freak out a little at the thought of 3 at once...

    It was a nice ending... well almost ending. There's still an epilogue! Yay!

    Wow! One handed beta-ing. Christev is amazing :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2009
    This story is just so beautifully written... I love your little slice-of-life moments. That was the most perfect ending I could have hoped for; I loved it and wouldn't change a single syllable. I got so wrapped up in it that I'm rather sad to see the end coming into view. I'll be waiting for your epilogue, though. Bring on the triplets!
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  • From PDamiani on September 03, 2009
    I read your most recent chapter and sighed deeply and happily ... many, many thanks for a most excellent story!
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  • From Tenar10r on September 03, 2009
    Thank you for a wonderful story.
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  • From voraciousreader on September 03, 2009
    I thought it WAS perfect--Severus midnight anxiety attack, the irrational desire to bar his hypothetical daughter's windows, the thumping heart attack when you realize that normalcy has begun in all its dizzying variety. Perfect. And you even found a solution to the problem of the Kissed and the dirty Warden. Frankly I think a year is being optimistic. Somebody is going to knife him. Yay. Will wait for the last (sob) of it with bated breath!
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  • From wudelfin on September 03, 2009
    such a hoot to read!!!
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