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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From on January 16, 2009
    OK THIS WAS A LITTLE OFF... DIDN'T REALLY GET THE CHAPTER.. WHAT HAPPEN TO HER TO CHUG A FREAKING BOTTLE OF HAPPY JUICE...... DID SHE REALIZED SHE WAS STARTING TO LIKE HIM OR SOMETHING...
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  • From theeloquentquill on January 16, 2009
    Well, when the chapter start, I was laughing from your comment to me... but I'm not laughing anymore :/

    Great chapter... but I'm worried.

    Please update soon


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  • From MooMandy on January 15, 2009
    Been meaning to review forever! I absolutely love your masterpiece! Kudos to you! I can't begin to tell you the magnitude of how much your slinky "quote"- about people being like slinkys- has enriched my life! My husband on the other hand would probably like to hurt you- as that's all I go around saying. Is it your own creation? What is it about people falling that's so darn funny? I can see we share a wicked sense of humor. Yay us! Love the quick updates and can't wait for more, more, more!!! Happy writing, doll!!! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K ;D
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  • From theeloquentquill on January 14, 2009
    Ahahahahaha I love this chapter!!!! :D LOVE IT

    *still laughs madly*
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  • From DawnEB on January 14, 2009
    "...matured into a vivacious assertive witch that pushed all his buttons, and he was a man who had many buttons."

    Has to be in my top 10 fanfic lines ever :D

    Wonderful story. I'm certainly hoping for a Hot kiss at New Year, something to get her simmering!

    I wonder how the wards would react to that?
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  • From Sherwii4602 on January 14, 2009
    Ohh yes i almost forgot about the impure thoughs on the wife and the irony of it all has made me giggle and thats hard to do for me.
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  • From Sherwii4602 on January 14, 2009
    yOu know, so much talent yet do you know how your going to finish this? must be a lot more chapters to come, however, I like how you write such long Paragraph keep it up your very good.
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  • From Gertie on January 14, 2009
    Another wonderful and well written chapter. The part about having impure thoughts about his wife made me snort my tea, and I plan on committing the Slytherin toast to Honor to memory. Fanfuckingtastic.
    I like the idea of Hermoine being Severus's redeption, not in the corny way it sounds, but more like the way one would process it in their own head. Does that make sense? I'm very caffine deprived.
    Please keep the chapters coming, because I've taken to checking the site for updates three and four times a day. I've become a crazed stalker. Not the scary looking into your window kind, more like the 13 year old girl who calls and hangs up when you answer the phone. Ok, coffee now.
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  • From Carlieisastreetmonster on January 14, 2009
    Poor, poor randy Severus. I don't doubt your abilities, I'm just curious to see what your particular style turns out to be. Although, I think I will be taking a look at Plan B, from the beginning though. I believe I like your writing style enough to not have to skip straight to the smut. =]
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  • From voraciousreader on January 14, 2009
    Love the set up. I assume there will be a bit of earth-shaking at midnight? He is actually trusting her! Giving her his potions is the ultimate act of trust for that man, and I almost felt a little weepy when he did it. Good chapter.
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  • From on January 14, 2009
    good point... they have lot to work out... he sneaky and she hardheaded... but in all due time i guess.... can you make the chapter longer though... i am really enjoying it too much when i come up short after 2 mns.....

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  • From pittwitch on January 14, 2009
    LOL @ Hermione making a list. Honor, indeed. Snorts.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on January 14, 2009
    I shall now plead with you for a first kiss...ready for the guilt trip? My own New Year began beautifully....only to get texted by my idiot ex-husband who abandoned me and our children with no notice from Iraq but seems to think its alright to still tell me how I can and can not live my life while completely ignoring the three amazing kids he helped create...My divorce from said fucktard, who I have been married to since I was 18 (14 years married) is now final.....dont I deserve a first kiss? Please?
    LOL



    Happy Writing, Darling.
    S_G
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on January 14, 2009
    I am so jealous of your ability to just update update update! But I love it! so please! Update!
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  • From CB13 on January 13, 2009
    My dear AV,

    While I am sure you and your darling will have a grand time in The Big Easy, I regret I am at a loss to head you to a good hotel. I always stayed with friends, and my last visit was in, lessee, 1997 or so. So sorry! However, I have little doubt that your tourist dollars will be well-spent in the National World War II Museum ( www.nationalww2museum.org ). It's on Magazine St, just a few blocks off St. Charles and probably an easy walk from the streetcar. Also, I'd advise you to skip the frozen daiquiris; not enough alcohol in the dang things for the price. The opposite is true of a drink called a Hand Grenade. Skip those, too.

    I am (gasp) a Yankee! But I do have family in the South, and only your mention of your husband prevents me from asking if you're actually my cousin Ann.

    (and yes! Another strong chapter! But now I think I'm getting impatient for them to warm up again. And are we going to get a look at Chez Snape?)

    Thank you ever so much for writing.

    Cheers,
    CB


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