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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From voraciousreader on December 21, 2008
    I still want to know where the pickled walnuts come in, though. ;)
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  • From jddammann on December 20, 2008
    Great chapter, we're getting there! :-) I'd love to watch Snape doing push-ups, that girl has got to get off of those pills! LOL Thank the Godess there are no antidepressents in this house. :-)

    I can't wait till the next chapter, it just keeps getting better and better.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 20, 2008
    Hah, they get along rather well I'd say! At least considering how they started out. Hum, life will be getting easier for both of them!

    I like the way you are slowly changing their relationship. I was wondering a bit in the beginning how you would archieve doing it. They seemed so full of dislike for each other. But you're doing great! They do complement each other each other, whilste they are obviously different they are both academics and have a love for knowledge.

    It's always a joy to read your updates!
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  • From voraciousreader on December 20, 2008
    Excellent! I love the way you have them 'using' each other to get what they need--Snape needs (desperately) to have intellectual stimulation and she (equally desperately) needs the help! I'm glad that she at least has a personal shopper, LOL. I wondered about that, since I couldn't see her breaking her schedule to go out to Harrod's and get the care packages for him. And you have a magically inventive mind, the pensieve projector is a great idea.
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  • From PHONELADY on December 20, 2008
    they seem to be doing better, ha what does he need with money he got her lol. and he can get out whenever he wants to ,his cell sounds better than her flat lol.
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  • From neelix on December 20, 2008
    Ha, I knew that would happen! Brilliant. Now they will start to have deep and meaningful work-related conversations, find that they actuallly like each other etc etc..... I can't wait for the snogging to begin in earnest!

    The only think I am pondering is... how to get him outy of Azkaban, and a decent enough reason for him to 'fess all and clear his name..... *bites lip in pondering pose a la Hermione Snape*
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  • From chickaboo on December 19, 2008
    Okay I just read this and I love it! What a great story concept, I can't wait for more!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 19, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From CB13 on December 18, 2008
    Wow, our Heroine is certainly wrapped up tightly. You do make a good point, though, about Hogwarts' lack of advanced maths. It got me thinking about the (probable) resultant monopoly on most aspects of finance and money & banking by Gringotts.

    Very interesting. Good writing should always get the audience thinking.

    Good work, sister.

    Cheers
    CB
    And PS, I used that catepault nonsense on my (stupid, stupid) Facebook page and it was an instant hit. Thanks again!
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  • From jddammann on December 18, 2008
    The story is great so far!

    I don't remember Hermione being quite so over the top, but with all the drugs she's taking who wouldn't be? :-) I hope Snape's notes are perfect she realizes she could use his help, which would also give him something to do and give them more to talk about. It was great when he kissed her at the wedding, stood behind her in the cell, let her cry in his lap, put her to bed, showed his softer side... I can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on December 18, 2008
    You update much quicker than I do. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for that. I absolutely love reading your story! Snape is a delightful character in this one.
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  • From ismene5 on December 18, 2008
    I love your story.
    Please go on soon.
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  • From jocat on December 18, 2008
    Hey great story. I like the way you don't ramble. One idea or plot twist per chapter, makes me look forward to the next installment. Love some more verbal banter between Snape and Hermonie.
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  • From neelix on December 18, 2008
    Blimey. I think Hermione is about to implode! At what point will she accept she can't do it all???
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  • From marcia on December 18, 2008
    Wow, someone has some serious control, paranoia, and obsessive compulsive issues and it isn't Snape. She's one messed up cookie and I'm want you to tell me why, in detail.
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