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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 16, 2008
    Well, at least he tries! Though I understand that it's not really helpful!

    So, Severus made notes in her files? Hmm, I think somebody may realise that it could be of advantage to have a second opinion... She's a real bitch, isn't she? Overworked to no ends, I get that, but still. And what does cause her depression? Work is certainly not the reason, more likely her immersion into it is a result of the depression. Okay, and maybe part of her perfectionist personality. But there has to be another reason, I am intrigued...
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  • From bluemoongurl628 on December 16, 2008
    I really enjoy your story, very well written.

    I wanted to know if you still needed a beta. let me know. ^_^


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  • From neelix on December 16, 2008
    I think it's Hermione who needs an extended stay chez Dementor Palace! She is seriously losing the plot..... sheesh!! And Severus! marking her papars like he's still at Hogwarts.

    I think I love him a little bit! lol....

    Great update as usual honey... can't wait for more :)
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  • From nck12nicholspd on December 16, 2008
    I'm lovin it! I'm just a bit frustrated that you don't update more often and with longer chapters....I can't wait to read more!
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  • From MomoDesu on December 16, 2008
    And the mood swings are explained. Gotta love anti-depressants!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 15, 2008
    I like it. Please udpate soon.

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  • From voraciousreader on December 15, 2008
    She's going to have to go through withdrawal when he gets out, isn't she? Ouch. Hopefully he'll have some suggestions to ease the load she's carrying, and I love the idea of his Imperial Snarkiness giving her his bed for the night.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 15, 2008
    They are getting all cuddly! I love that...

    It's incredible how a crying woman can affect men! They either run away as fast as they can, or they get all protective and try to make everything all right! Of course Snape would start to feel protective of his little wife. (Not that he could run away anyways!)

    Keep your updates coming, I am soooo hooked!
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  • From CB13 on December 14, 2008
    AV, my dear, I continue to enjoy your delicious Snapey story, but I must confess that the best bit in Chapter 12 was the Latin gift you gave us all for Christmas: I have a catepult. Give me all your money or I will throw rocks at your head.

    You're clearly a genius with my kind of humor. I can't wait to see how you unravel Our Heroine. Keep up the great work!!!

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on December 14, 2008
    Hello Sweety,
    thanks for the good wishes.
    My, my, do I see a tender thread between the two? How lovely Severus can be (matching to the title). It was a nice balance between Hermoine's working life and Severus/Moine's day. Very nice!
    Oh, sometimes I wish I had a husband in Askaban. Just joking. I am looking forward to the next chappy, could you make it longer???? Pleaaaaaaaaassssseeee!
    Till then,
    LOL Alex
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  • From Olwen on December 14, 2008
    Congratulations, your being added to my personal list of worthwhile fic writers. I love the dynamic you've set up for Snape and Granger. I feel if you had the time to devote to writing a novel that Snape's warming to her would go even slower. I think you caught him best in the moment of being unable to accept the first packages. No mater how egotistical he seems you can always tell that Severous doesn't feel that he is worthy of being cared for.
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  • From LCGrabski on December 13, 2008
    Every time! Every time I get so excited for your new chapters and I'm so sad when they're over. I really am hopelessly addicted to what you do. Never stop!
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  • From purpledragon on December 13, 2008
    I love this story!This fanfic is the first one i've read in along time that isn't one of Miss Fig's(she's my girl)I love how your makeing Hermione and Severus.I can't wait till the net update.
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  • From neelix on December 13, 2008
    I love that your latin is improving and excpect the chapter titles will become more elongated and harder to pronounce as the story progresses!

    In answer to your question - I think Severus needs much more than a hug to solve his problems, but it's always a good start!!!

    Loved this update and Hermione being able to talk to him. Bless him, he's a bit of a soft touch, even if he does keep it well hidden!
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  • From rini868 on December 13, 2008
    Camera phones = zero privacy

    Poor Hermione. I think Lee should have been more understanding... although she did use glamours to cover her tiredness so people might not have known.


    Maybe she could get Severus to help her with stuff or finding another person to hire for her charms team?
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