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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From AlexandraMalfoy on December 08, 2008
    Hello Appolonia,

    oh, I was so happy to see you've updated. Since I recived surgery twice last week it was a real treat after awefull days. Thank you very much.
    I specially liked the last chapter. It just shows how much Severus really sufferes in jail. The way he stares at the boxes, not knowing what to do - very well written. The description of Moine's workday was a bit too long or maybe I was just to curious for more Sev. Who knows?
    Anyways, I'm definetly looking forward to the next chappies and meeting of the newly wedds. Wonder how they will get along.
    Please update soon and till then
    LOL,
    Alex
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  • From rini868 on December 08, 2008
    Oh dear me
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  • From dannilawless on December 08, 2008
    Ok. I loved this chapter it was like the chapter in 'What Katie Did in School' (hope you've read it) called Christmas boxes where the Girls at boarding school get boxes within boxes of goodies from home, and it makes them realise that they're not as alone as they thought they were. Its precious!!!
    With Sev remember the finer things of life now and yern for his freedom??
    P.S. I'd love a bottle of that 'Good hair day' please forward as you see fit! :P
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on December 08, 2008
    I promise a better review later, but now I'm fixing to run to my grandparents' house with my tail between my legs to complete my psychology paper. AWESOMEFREAKINAWESOME chapter--I love it when the Grinch's heart grows three sizes (though I'm not sure that's what's happening here, I'm thinking more a discovery of this thing called... gratitude? emotion? Ah, well, it's bound to be interesting)--and I'm starting to wonder why 3 updates a week sounded so great. :o)

    And you are correct, overqualified.

    -TQW (that's my rapper name or something)
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  • From neelix on December 07, 2008
    omg. I have been on holiday and have only just been able to catch up on your story, so it's been a real treat to devour 5 chapters in one sitting!

    Laughed at Severus' list of demands... *snort*

    Grinned at the 'baby' talk.... hehehe

    and cried a little at the cell scene, Severus's softly spoken 'Hermione' and his breath in her ear, and her trying to make the place at least a little habitable, moved me beyond words.

    Nicely done - now... a little more perhaps, dinner parties allowing??
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  • From amsev on December 06, 2008
    Loving the story! More in-depth (sorta) review at FFN. You really should post Plan B to FFN.
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  • From FoxyBlueQuartz on December 06, 2008
    I want to start by saying, I love your story already and it's only the second chapter! You have given Hermione her spine back! I honestly thought the poor girl had her backbone ripped from her, thanks to fandom. Don't get me wrong, I love a cliche Snape/Hermione PWP as much, maybe more, than the next person. But, I find your story so refreshing. Hermione is a determined, independent, smart girl- not some flimsy damsel a lot of fan fic tends to turn her into. And Snape! You remembered his beard! I haven't read a Snape/Hermione fic in ages that mentioned Snape's beard- I remember he had a beard from the first book and on, but fandom seemed to have forgotten that. And you spared no expense avoiding the cliche sexing-Snape-isms. Again, I'm a fan of fandom Snape; but sometimes I hunger to get away from the Fabio-like being fans have morphed him into. You mentioned his large nose, the sharp facial features, and oh I could go on. I really do like this story and I can hardly wait to read the rest. I just had to stop though and let you know how much I apperciate your fan fic.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on December 06, 2008
    It must be difficult to be 'successful'. I certainly wouldnt know. Still...Hermione seems to be taking it well. I wonder what Severus will do once he discovers how wealthy Hermione is. Which in itself is a different story. Usually its a wealthy Snape and middle class Hermione. Another great chapter! Waiting impatiently for the next.

    Red
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  • From rini868 on December 06, 2008
    I
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 06, 2008
    Sorry, hon. I didn't mean to be cryptic. I just hate to have a wrong guess written down for posterity. lol Okay, here you go. I think he thinks regardless of his good deeds, and ultimately of his sacrifices, he deserves to be punished, to suffer, for all the things he did wrong. He was a Death Eater, whether he wanted to be one or not, and he committed horrific crimes and treated people horribly. And, being in Azkaban, no matter how awful, gives him the time to think and suffer alone. He doesn't have to face his past or even his future. He doesn't have to do anything for the first time in a long while. And, in a warped way, his life is in his control for the first time since he was a teenager, as long as he alone holds the key to his release. So, he stays.

    But, now he may have a reason to finally get himself released...

    There. How was that? lol How far off am I? :-)

    I am really enjoying this story, as I think you can now tell. ha ha ha So, please update again soon. Thank you. HG4eva
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 05, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LCGrabski on December 05, 2008
    Every time I see that you've posted a new poster little alarms go off in my head and I try to quietly scream, "F yes!" Don't want to disturbed the neighbours and so forth.
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  • From HE5972 on December 05, 2008
    "The Law of Expanding Crap"?!?!? LMFAO!! Who are you? Are you related to Clausius and Thomson? Holy fuck, appyling the 2nd law of thermodynamics to Hermione's organizantional system is classic!!!!! (Not done yet - to my knowledge) But then again, SS/HG=Entropy.
    Love this!

    HE5972
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  • From Sampdoria on December 05, 2008
    Thank you for another quick (and great) update, I love it when stories I love get updated as quickly as this:-))

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  • From CB13 on December 05, 2008
    AV - more jolly good work. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while! I really enjoy how you throw HG back into the blender of her life after her wedding. You convey a very good sense of where her head is...quite, quite far from her husband.

    Cheers, and thanks for writing,

    CB
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