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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From TenderQuaintWitch on December 05, 2008
    OHOHOH, and I want to know--when are the pickled walnuts going to come into play?
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on December 05, 2008
    Hermione's sure the sharp one. That's a fairly brilliant invention that her *ahem* dear husband could certainly benefit from. Oh, and:
    "As most Hogwarts graduates couldn
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on December 05, 2008
    Fantastic, fantastic! Good job! I truly love this story! Thank you so much!
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  • From robotnik1985 on December 05, 2008
    Hello there,
    I just wanted to let you know that I'm also enjoying your story and waiting for further chapters. So far it's very nice (I like the slow progress), the plot promising and quite uncommon. But his self-imposed imprisonment makes me worried. I hope that you have REALLY good reason for it because I've got a few ideas and they are... far-fetched at best. I would hate to read something so trivial in such a promising story. I hope you'll surprise me in a positive way.
    wish you lots of good ideas,
    Belle

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  • From SorceressFujin on December 05, 2008
    Excellent!
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 05, 2008
    Short but certainly important! So neither of them is as cold as they'd like to be and people to believe... They don't hate each other, either. That certainly changes everything!
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  • From rini868 on December 04, 2008
    I just started reading your fic. It's really good :)

    I had a look at your chapter titles. You wouldn
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on December 04, 2008
    I don't see anything wrong with the length of the chapter. It was like the perfect dress--long enough to cover what's important and short enough to attract interest. Nice *snifflesob* moment there with the razor. Freakin' sweet. Tugged at my heartstrings for sure. Of course, there really can't be any tender moments there--it has to be a grungy, stinky, yelling deatheater/prisoner, and they just don't make for kodak moments.

    xx
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  • From voraciousreader on December 04, 2008
    Ah, so her involuntary respect for his humanity is interfering with his self-imposed penance, is it? He can let his pride eat at him later, when she's cleaned up conditions that a jihadi wouldn't inflict on a prisoner. Business marriage or not, they now have a partnership, and she will make it work, despite his emotional baggage. I do hope she brings him some new bedding, though.
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  • From Tenar10r on December 04, 2008
    Very nice twist.

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  • From TriniMinx on December 04, 2008
    Hi, I've been reading this story since you first posted and I only chose to write a review now (after chpt.7) and I have a couple comments:

    -- Your chapters are a bit short. I find you could have combined the chapters along the way to create longer ones. For example, chapter 6 and 7, could very well have been one chapter -- as they are the same thought, same place, same scenes, just different settings. Does that make sense? It's like the wedding, then the next hour of her 2 hours. There doesn't need to be two chapters to seperate two hours of time in your story.

    -- I find that your story is progressing rather well. I'm def. interested. Though I wasn't sure I would be after the first chapter, but I kept coming back out of curiosity. I want to see what direction you will take this. Will he ever be free? Who will fall in love first? Her? or Him? Will they ever actually fall in love at all?

    Otherwise, good show so far.
    Update soon :o)
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on December 03, 2008
    I've been so very bad to you. I haven't reviewed once! I'm so sorry, I just kept getting lazy. Anyway, this story is soooooo good. I love it. Please continue!


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  • From Sampdoria on December 02, 2008
    Oh yes, another brilliant update! While I don't exactly want for everything to blow up in Hermiones face, I am usually rather "protective" of her, a small part of me do think that when she aint smart enough to realise that Severus is not as guilty as she thinks him to be, he deserves to annoy her a little.... (I am here of course using the assumption that Severus aint guilty in the crimes they have put him in Azkaban for).
    I do enjoy it because this Hermione is strong enough to take it. I would be very surprised if she lumps her shoulders and sniffles some tears when things aint going her way. I like this "give as good as she gets kind of girl" and while Severus probably have more than one secret up his sleeve, he wont be able to break her. Not to mention, I highly doubt that Severus would want someone with less spirit and attitude than his new wife. He doesn't strike me as someone who is looking for submisive, weak, stuttering and tame in a partner, he highly enjoy this game he is playing and is probably having more fun than he ever had. At the same time I hope and whish for him to be smart enough to know that Hermione Granger is perfect as his wife just as she is, attitude and all:-))
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 02, 2008
    No feeding the snakes, my Hamsters all died of old age... And the last one about 17 years ago. So I don't think I am at risk of emprisonement!

    Witch Weekly? I only read magazines like that when taking the train - but being a witch she doesn't need to waste her time in lengthy train rides... I think she would consider reading that kind of magazine vain and pointless, don't you agree?

    A year grieving time? LOL... They REALLY don't like each other! I wonder what that will give when Snape gets out of prison!

    Steadfast and abiding love? Who is he trying to kid? The last part is probably more honest!

    Oh I definitely see Snape enjoy riling her up! Oh my, the two of them will have a - well let's say - turbulent relationship. Hehe, obviously we all wait for Snape to get out! She's asking for it! Although I guess that Snape is right with his observation that she's barely a little, scared girl!

    Great update (like all the others since I reviewed for the last time)!
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