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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From rini868 on July 21, 2009
    *sigh* They're together :)

    I hope everything is alright.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, but really, take your time.
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  • From Clairvoyant on July 21, 2009
    Well, it's about time! I finished reading this chapter well past 1AM this morning and since I had to up at 6AM, I thought it better to review after caffeine.

    It was so worth the wait, AV. One of the finest chapters yet, along with the angsty ones of redemption, religion and the DE half-baked orgies. You are a fabulous writer and I will be so sad to see this story end. *sniff, sniff, crying tears of joy and sadness*

    But I know your muse will continue to inspire you to write great fanfiction.


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  • From neelix on July 21, 2009
    As for your personal life, I hope whatever it was has resolved itself and all is well. I have to say I was concerned for you, I knew it was unlike you to keep us waiting for so long.

    On the other hand though, by the time this chapter finally came, *cough*, I was like a parched person dying of thirst, and savoured every word as if it was my last drop. THANK YOU!!!!! It was beautifully crafted and very, very real. *breaks out the pom poms* Go You!
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  • From DawnEB on July 21, 2009
    I just want to say, I liked the lemons. I mean, I REALLY liked the lemons. Thank you for the lemons, I wouldn't be without them.

    But...

    You see, you've really spoiled me. I was (as I've already said) really enjoying the lemons, then I got to the end and thought 'Could do with a bit more story in there.' Don't get me wrong, the lemons are good, but I love the way you write the meat of the story, too :)

    Anyway, they finally got together, they finally admitted their feelings aloud (and in front of a witness!) and I loved the way Severus immediately thought of the advantage of beating her to it rather than angsting over it making him seem weak. Did I mention the great lemons?

    Only one more chapter and an epilogue? *sniffles*
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  • From voraciousreader on July 20, 2009
    Oh, that was almost worth the wait--loved ffolkes and the marriage contract!
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  • From katiekrm on July 20, 2009
    I was worried that my last review might come across as a little harsh and it seems it did, which is why I am often afraid to review for fear of offending. I'm sorry if it rubbed you the wrong way. It was not my intention. This is a story I have really been into, to your credit.
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  • From Lauriurix on July 20, 2009
    amazing story :)

    I enjoyed reading every chapter of it and looking forward for more or what's left of it.
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  • From PDamiani on July 20, 2009
    Oh, thank goodness! I was terrified that this story had been abandoned! And I've had such a lousy, terrible, downright shitty day today that a new chapter was just what I needed! Thanks ever so much for writing! (I hope the last couple of chapters includes some of those hilarious, bigoted little house elves, too ...)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 20, 2009
    First and foremost I hope real life wasn't treating you too horribly. There are many days when I wish I could read and write fanfiction for a living rather than face my day-to-day life. I am glad you are coming out of whatever it was. And, thank you for that perfect and delicious update. I needed a story with happiness and you delivered in spades. Thank you and a cyberhug to you for your real life. HG4eva
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  • From Firesblood on July 08, 2009
    Absolutely fantastic. I just came across this fiction about three days ago and have fallen completely in love with it! Please tell me there is more! If there is, I look forward to the next chapter. I love how you've portrayed both Severus and Hermione, and their stubbornness in the face of their situations.
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  • From on July 07, 2009
    It's getting so close! I am having a minor spazz attack.
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  • From Clairvoyant on July 06, 2009
    Perfect pacing here, AV. Not too rushed or too slow. Great chapter. When will we see the Hermione-shaped indentation in the matress?
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  • From ANGELWINGZ1983 on July 05, 2009
    LOVE THE NEW CHAPTERS!!! Finally they get back together!!! Oh Jake, how every girl wishes to have a bi/gay BBF like him. *Sigh* What would Sev and Hermione do without him or the meddling Billy and Ginny, bless their hearts! XD
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  • From Robs on July 05, 2009
    *does a happy dance* I think I fell off my seat anyway, LOL! That chapter was pretty much what we've been waiting for for the last...I don't know...month or so? And was it fabulous, or was it fabulous? It fulfilled every expectation. I had kind of thought that once they were back on speaking terms things would happen fairly quickly with marrying again an'all. I'm glad the smut hasn't happened yet. It seems more real that way. It took that chapter for me to realise just how engrossed I had become in this story too xD I finally noticed just how much they needed each other to live normal, happy lives. And Jake! Man, I think Jake is going to be in real trouble with his best girl friend when he puts in another appearance! Tink made me laugh too. I knew Hermione would have something to say when she found out about her and her dirty, dirty habits! *plonks self back on seat* right, now I've returned to my normal state, I eagerly anticipate the next chapter!!!
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  • From CatSnads on July 02, 2009
    Just wanted to say thanks.

    This is one of the best FanFics I've read in a long time and for the past two days it has taken me to read this (I was marginally addicted :P) my family has been cut off from my attention span.

    Ah well, I'd better go catch up on the housework (what wouldn't I do to have Donald and Daisy?).
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