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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV

From eyesuhkattspeleeng on November 25, 2008
As with most of your work I've read, I am throughly amazed. Very unique from most marriage law fics. Dare I say, much better than most of the ones I've read. I was getting a weary of them all but I love this. I love how you've captured Hermione. It's different but in a way, this is the most real I've ever seen her in this kind of fiction. It's lovely.
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From on November 24, 2008
I like it!!! Its different and new..... Can't wait for an update.... and I have no clue sorry to let you down by not knowing.....
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From FerielMI on November 24, 2008
Wow. Brilliant story!! I love the prison thing on the same basis as you... its different! Different stories are much more interesting to read. There are definately too many stories that have Snape pardoned or there is some lingering attraction from their Hogwarts days... I've read heaps of them and they all sound the same after two or three! I like longer ones that actually have a story line. (though pwp's have their own kind of appeal)
I also agree with you on the Ron and Hermione pairing... I've always thought that she was far too active in her life to settle down and want the family that he would. I was most dissapointed when Rowling paired them... but thats why fanfiction is so awesome! You get to play with her characters and make them dance the way YOU want them to... not how she wanted them to!
All in all, a great story, I can't wait to read more!

Feriel
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From Lauriurix on November 23, 2008
interesting :) im excited to see what Snape wrote as his demands :P

no idea on the A.Ffoulkes :S
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From shanarenea on November 23, 2008
I like this story. I can't wait to see what the list of demands is. Please update soon.
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From wintaer on November 23, 2008
self-imposed imprisonment... why oh why? Guilt?

wrangling cats... haha! *sing song voice* Hermione's gonna have a bugbear!
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From HermioneMalfoFan on November 23, 2008
Yeah, sometimes I need a little change. And then, I can always enjoy a nicely written story. And this one is nicely written, so...

Hah, pet snake owners only? I knew the hamster was a good choice! :-D

Yes! He would just NOT fall in love with his pupil! I always pictured him as a proud man - not a leech lusting after little girls. There are so many storys that promote it... Uhh...

So I get that right? He's got evidence that could free him? Why the hell is he in prison then? Euhmm... I am not quite sure I understand this man! But it will for sure be interesting for the two of them once he gets out! Especially with that contract... Ah, I think Hermione might not quite know what she's in for!

Really nice update, already waiting for the next chapter!
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From amsev on November 23, 2008
Gah, now I have the Perry Mason theme music stuck in my head: all bodacious brasses. Jeez, they sure knew how to write TV soundtracks in the 60s, all jazzy and sexy.

Hoosegow is just slang for jail. ROFLMAO: And his only true lustful fantasies he
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From DivineHope123 on November 23, 2008
Another great chapter. We all know Sevie is a greedy git some times. I have a feeling it's not gonna be all sugar quills and plush chairs for him :P

I'm quite Slytherin myself in the reality sense. I would do the exact same in his situation.

Hope Hermione has fun cutting out some of the clauses haha.

With love,
Falle
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From dannilawless on November 23, 2008
Ooh!!! So he's incarcerated because he's witholding evidence that could clear himself!??
I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!
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From Severussgrl on November 23, 2008
I don't know who the man.. that is severus' lawyer, but this is a really great story. I haven't really read much on here, but it's good none the less. I love the jabs they throw at each other...
How will you find a way around the whole 'multiple life sentences'? that is going to be interesting... anyways, good work. :D
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From Sampdoria on November 23, 2008
Another great update! I just loooove this:-)) There are several reasons for my love; it is a new way to write the MLC, your writing is excellent, but most importantly; your characters are equals, both of them are snarky and out for exploiting the advantages the other one can bring them. I am so tired of the "Severus is abusive and hurt Hermione, who sniffles some tears, lump her shoulders and come crawling back for more abuse, because Severus have issues and thus are allowed to be abusive and she is just a dumb child who needs someone to tell her how stupid she is who thinks she knows anything at all. But if she begs for forgiveness and declare her undying love among with promises to never think that he can be wrong, he migth forgive her and even show some affection..." Gagh, nope, serve me a snarky Severus any day (Severus is snarky:-)) but please give me the Hermione who saved Harry and Ron's arses time after time, who served Umbrigde to the Centaurs and who obliviated her own parents to save them; That is not a damzel in distress!!!
Not to mention, your story entertains me, it makes me laugh, and it makes me feel good when reading it, and that is the most important thing since I read fanfic for the entertainment:-))) I look forward to read more!!!!
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From bubblybabs on November 23, 2008
Can't wait to see how this comes along... I never understood JKR putting Ron and Hermione together - SS/HG should have been canon! Am awaiting to find out all of Snapes demands as well!
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From voraciousreader on November 23, 2008
The Roger Moore movie about the irascible, cat-loving, woman-hating, whiskey-drinking and needlepoint enthusiast counter-terrorist agent 'ffolkes'? Yes, 2 small 'f's". like the chapter, too.
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From AlexandraMalfoy on November 23, 2008
Lovely! I just love the Marriage Law-theme. It's fantastic how you describe the idea of Moine marrying Snape. And the scene in Ascaban is written so neatly that you can almost smell the dirt. Please, please go on soon. I'm curious to know what terms Severus comes up with. And will he stay in the jail? oh, I'm not so sure about that.
LOL, Alex
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