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Reviews for Becoming Silhouettes

By : RhiannonoftheMoon
  • From oliversangel on February 01, 2009
    *points finger at authoress* You!! Are!!! Wonderful!!! *tackle roll glomp* I am reading your Labryinth story, and thanks to the new format, when I clicked in the HP section, I saw your name. So, imediately I read, and I am immensely glad I did. This is bloody fantastic. I am sorry, but you won't get a very coherent or eloquent review from me this time. I read the thing in one go, and my mind is absolutely racing with everything I have read. I have to say, that my favorite part, was when Severus was all loopy from the cure. He was absolutely adorable, and I loved seeing the softer, more armorous side of him. As always, this is wonderfully detailed, fantastically written, the characters are all perfect. Oh,loved Serverus's snipe at Draco about Hermione's reasoning behind starting her Clinic. I also love that she is a wizarding equivelant of a plastic surgeon. It's brilliant. The whole story is, it's got me on the edge of my seat here. I was devastated to read the last chapter. I am chomping at the bit for more. Oh, and I loved the Sweeney Todd reference. I adore that movie, so when I read, the "Benjamin Barker's ward for the criminally insane" I giggled and cheered. LOL. Love this, love you, and as I should have done when I began reading, "Play the Game", I am going to check and see what else you've written, and hopefully it will tide me over until there are more updates. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on January 23, 2009
    I think you have given the best psychologically plausible reason for Snape to become interested in Hermione that I have ever read. Yes, the man has spent his entire life at Hogwarts, and was never really socialized in any other environment. And the image of a stoned Snape was wonderful!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 22, 2009
    I like the originality of the story you're writing and I like you're version of Hermione, Snape and the rest. I look forward to Hermione being the solution to the wizarding illness, but I look forward even more to him staying "nice" to her. lol Loving it! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 08, 2009
    this is awesome. I love it so far, please update soon
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 01, 2009
    Faith Hill - This Kiss 3:16

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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on January 01, 2009
    Excellent chapter, very reminiscent of what I've read of London in the plague outbreak in the 1660's and of the typhoid outbreaks in the 1900's. So, when do we find out what happened to Ginny?
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  • From ApollinaV on December 21, 2008
    No no no! Don't take him to bed Draco. Take him to Hermione!

    Love this fic. Love it, love it, love it.

    At least he hasn't shown symptoms of rage (yet!). We need Hermione to put on her WonderWoman cape and boots and save the day.
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  • From LCGrabski on December 21, 2008
    Well, I hate just gushing like a wordless twit but honestly... you're story is so good that I can't quite say what I mean. Just know that I think you're doing a lovely job and I am in love with your story.
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  • From ANON - Blair on December 10, 2008
    I stand up and give you a bow. Not only did you keep Hermione and Snape from being OOC you did a great job with the detail. Which nothing gets under my skin like a very OOC Hermione or Snape. I'm also a big believer in detail so you earned extra brownie points for that too. Nothing better then being able to see the scene in your mind as you read. Your plot moves like a well oiled car. No bumps or pitfalls that would confuse someone and have them back track trying to figure out where they fell off the happy fanfiction train. Such a fantastic way to let them meet again and bravo on coming up with a reasonable way of having Snape alive in your story. Keeping writing you've definitly have skill with capturing the readers interest with your creative writing.

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  • From Aurette on December 03, 2008
    Ok, first off, I love this story. Very entertaining! I am particularly fond of your Draco. always hated that brat but a well done Draco is a pleasure indeed. Keep writing, love it so far. Secondly...SHORT?! Have you lost your mind?! No. he. is. not! Tall! That man is Tall! Short me arse, Tall, I say! >sticks fingers in her ears< I can't HEAR you!! LA LA LA! Too busy looking at TALL SNAPE in my head! ~ahem~ now continue...
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  • From ApollinaV on November 29, 2008
    Wow. Another very well written chapter. This is like the best fic that nobody seems to be reading which is a huge pity.

    I liked the desciption of the floo signal/traffic jam. I don't think I've seen anything like it before. Very original.

    As always, I look forward to new material!

    AV
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on November 29, 2008
    "Ghost Busters". Bill Murray's line when Egon is giving a synopsis of their situation with Zool and the gatekeepers. I watch too much late night TV. I absolutely loved it when Severus pelted Draco with the dragon dung! Nearly spit coffee on my keyboard! Think I'd have learned by now not to drink while reading (grumble). the fantasy sequences were quite good, also. Waiting for more!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 23, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ApollinaV on November 23, 2008
    I still haven't quite worked out all the reasons why Snape doesn't want to have anything to do with her, but I look forward to finding out. So the rash clears up quickly? Pity. And who stole the champignons? Plot thickens. Excellent work m'dear.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 22, 2008
    Thank you for clearing up the issue of Snape's hieght! I think part of the confusion in fanon is because Alan Rickman is actually 6" in real life and they made no adjustments when shooting the films when he was with other actors. (I have a theatrical degree and I have noticed that tall actors are actually rather rare, just as an aside) Good chapter!
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