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Reviews for Starts With A Spin, Staff Edition

By : tripperfunster
  • From katecooley on November 30, 2008
    Aw! I hate for this to end! It was so much fun to read! And I'd like to see Snape TRY and look Harry in the eye after this chapter. *snort*

    Very nice! Shame there ain't no mo' but I like it!
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  • From katecooley on November 29, 2008
    Niiiice! A good canon twist that has them working this out between them. I'm interested to see how the Shrieking Shack goes!
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  • From Jilliane on November 29, 2008
    (Chapters 8 & 9)

    I always like it in a story when Severus gets the chance to tell Remus how the Marauders made him feel, and when he doesn't blame Remus for it, realising that Remus himself did no actual harm to him. I also like it, however, when Remus realises that he should have been stronger in standing up to James and Sirius. That aside, I loved the episode in the broom closet, with Filch pounding at the door. At times your dialogue for Severus makes him a little bit OOC, but it's well written, hilariously funny dialogue nonetheless, so I'm not complaining. I'm really enjoying this story very much, and am looking forward to the next chapter to find out what Severus has in mind for Remus!
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  • From railynn2001 on November 28, 2008
    This story is so wonderful!!! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. I love your characterization (is that a real word? hmm) and your humor is so wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing this.
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  • From katecooley on November 27, 2008
    I love this Snape. I like how he's not so proper in his own head. "what with Dumbledore's inability to keep his pie-hole shut" *SNORT!*

    And aside from that, it's a great little story!

    *snickering giggle* Filch the sea captain! And "AvKedav" is great!

    I must say, you've got a great writing style. It just flows beautifully... and makes me cackle! ;)
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  • From Jilliane on November 26, 2008
    (Chapters 4-8)

    Ah! A cliffhanger! Grr! I'm enjoying this story immensely, and arriving at the cliffie cut like a knife! Arrghh! Please update soon, and if you have an update alert list, please add me to it! jillianetpr@yahoo.com Thanks!
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  • From Jilliane on November 26, 2008
    (Chapter 3)

    OMG.......I was going to read this story through and then review, but.......ROFL.......this line:

    "Snape had half a mind to whip out his still hard prick and beat the old wizard senseless with it."

    has me barely able to type, I'm laughing so hard! There are many fabulously funny lines through this story, the humour is probably the best I've read lately, but that line is absolutely priceless! I can't wait to read the rest!! Bravo!
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  • From katecooley on November 26, 2008
    I love it when you have Snape bust out something like "riding the baloney pony".

    and oooh, no! Not now! Dang Voldemort. But isn't this third year?
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  • From katecooley on November 24, 2008
    This is fantastically, hilariously sexy! I hope it goes on for a while, because I absolutely love it.

    I lost it at : "I could be bound to Hagrid and spend the next 3 days enduring his dropping hard consonants all over my clean floor."
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  • From evanone on November 20, 2008
    OMG Snape in pink? And sexy woman knickers for men? You evil girl or boy/writer whatever. I couldn't stop laughing, poor Snape. I'm curious what you have in store for him.
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  • From evanone on November 20, 2008
    I hope that you are not discouraged by lack of comments. You have good hand in writing, and I enjoy reading your fics. Keep this up.
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