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By : Audrey
  • From Prissylilchica on June 21, 2009
    [gr post got cutt offfffff]to be a part of something so awesome. It has set the bar high for my own writting,I've had alot of interesting idea's but I have some trouble writing Sev accurately because the situations I would but him are very very different from how they would be very different then you've ever really seen. It's a softer side of Snape... But I don't want to make him too soft, unrealistically soft.
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  • From dragon88 on June 20, 2009
    hmmm I think Dumbledore may have just realised that she is accomplished at occlumency? Or maybe he already knew?
    oooh all these questions, still not letting anything go about Draco I see lol Good chapter, I like how Snape and Ellie are both awkward when it comes to talking to one another, highlights the similarities between them :)
    As to the connection the song had with Snape the line 'my art, my redemption, my only salvation' is what reminded me most but then people interpret things differently lol Anyway enough with my randomness, as always cannot wait for more :D
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  • From dragon88 on June 14, 2009
    Yay was so glad to see that chapter twenty had been posted! mmmmm interesting chapter....very interesting, what is going on with Draco!?! Me thinks Draco's father may have had a hand in his sudden change of heart lol I know Lucius is always the bad guy....but he does it sooo well hehe
    I was listening to my music the other day when "I'm alive" by Disturbed came on, the lyrics reminded me of Snape and your fiction, dunno have a listen see what you think.
    Oooh I'm looking forward to the 15th of July too :P
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  • From dragon88 on June 02, 2009
    Certainly eased my appetite though I could still eat dessert hehe I have a feeling Snape already suspects that whatever she is hiding is to do with Lucius, how strange that he couldn't get into her mind, pretty fortunate for her though can't see Snape staying all that calm if he knew lol

    Another tasty chapter :D

    Dx
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  • From dragon88 on May 26, 2009
    Ooooh I like the thunder and lightening for dramatic effect :D I so thought Snape was gonna burst in at that moment!

    Another great chapter, more suspense and as always i'm left wanting more :)

    D x
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  • From Prissylilchica on May 21, 2009
    Of course Lucius was lovely! That's how the man works isn't it? Lovely, prim and proper... until he lures you into private and then! HE POUNCES! LIKE RAWR! =) There's nothing wrong with that either... Not when you liked to be pounced =)

    Glad I wasn't the only one who saw that little mis-wording... it's something I could see Draco saying, trying to be like father dearest but not getting it quite right... =)

    Can't wait to read more! I get off easy because I get to read before everyone else! =) YAY for Harry Potter OCD!
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  • From dragon88 on May 18, 2009
    Really good chapter! I think lucius spies a deatheater in the making. Ellie might now have realised that Lucius isn't all that nice, the way you wrote it I actually felt frightened of what he would do to her. Poor naive, innocent Ellie, Lucius is a very bad man hehe

    More please!! D x
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  • From Prissylilchica on May 14, 2009
    In response to this:

    Hey it is not polite to just assume the worst of such proper people like Lucius Malfoy (cough) ;)

    Anyone who has read Pain Of Becoming (Which I re-read for the millionth time last night) would KNOW that assuming the worst from Lucius is accurate in your stories =)

    Another excellent chapter, though I think you should pay a little more attention to Lucius's words in the line:


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  • From dragon88 on May 12, 2009
    I think I would have done the same to Draco had that been my cat, just plain mean :S Poor Ellie, I cannot forsee the next chapter going all that well for her. I loved your descriptions of the clothes and how she looked :)

    bring on the next chapter! :D
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  • From Audrey on May 10, 2009
    Hey hun! Great to see you are back!
    And I would be glad to have you back as a beta, hurrahy! If you coudl e-mail me quickly at audreycooper@hotmail.de that would be fab (you have been away for so long I can't find your e-mail anymore)
    Thanks about pointing out Draco's eyes, but actually in this case I deliberately moved away from canon. I have done it before. I actually know his eyes are blue but it's wierd, when I imagine him he usually has light green eyes and I just go with it.
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  • From Prissylilchica on May 10, 2009
    Hey Momo!

    So a while ago my computer fried and I lost pretty much everything! This is the first time I've gotten to read past what I've beta-ed and it's looking really good. I would say that you should be careful not to rush it to much, and to pay attention to some minor details. The chapter where you first meet Draco you say his eyes are green, but they are in fact blue. =) Not everyone would know that off hand like me, but then again, I sleep to Harry Potter of tape so I'm unique. Now that I have a computer back I can help out again! Lemme know! You should still have my e-mail address!

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From dragon88 on May 06, 2009
    I suppose Lucius Malfoy could be a kindly friend offering to help out dear Severus ...or he could be a sneaky, death-eater with a plan up his sleeve hehe the suspense is almost killing me! I felt sorry for Draco in this chapter, will there be more Draco and Ellie soon? I can't see Severus being to happy that Lucius is taking her shopping lol

    As ever can't wait for the next installment :D Dx
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  • From dragon88 on April 29, 2009
    ah so thats Malfoy's sneaky plan lol I love the christmas present exchange, Snape was really unsettled by her gift, the wood carving was a lovely idea:) As always more, more and more please hehe
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  • From dragon88 on April 21, 2009
    hmmmmm Lucius is rather interested in Ellie is he not? :P Yay for the New year party! Oh bless poor Severus is he going to go dress shopping lol

    I really like the interactions with Snape and Ellie in this chapter. You can tell he is trying though he is completely out of his depth which I think is rather sweet and all through it you manage to keep him true to his usual self :) The interactions between Lucius and dear Eleanor are even more interesting, she has a thing for the malfoy men hehe not that I blame her lol
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  • From dragon88 on April 19, 2009
    Snape's for christmas eeeeek will be interesting to see how that unfolds hehe I also cannot wait for more Ellie and Draco encounters, will Lucius Malfoy be throwing a Christmas party? :)
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