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Reviews for Blackeyed Girl

By : Audrey
  • From dragon88 on April 18, 2009
    Hey just writing to say...MORE PLEASE :P I really like how you keep Snape true to his character while opening him up slightly, making him the guardian of Ellie hehe poor Snape. I've loved it all but the most recent chapter was really cool, really emotive and compelling to read.
    So to summarise I liked muchly please please write some more :)
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  • From MaryAnn on April 07, 2009
    Ch 6. Good chapter but hard to read. Snape was terrible, basically trying to condemn Eleanor to his own solitude and weirdness. Ginny is very sweet and brave standing up to him, and Eleanor doesn
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  • From MaryAnn on April 07, 2009
    I love this Dumbledore :) I think it
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  • From MaryAnn on April 07, 2009
    Ch 4 is very interesting with the interaction between Eleanor and other people. How she becomes an outsider, how a few times behaving in a manner that is deemed odd is enough to achieve that. That fundamental mismatch with the rest of humanity.
    I do think these slight
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  • From MaryAnn on April 07, 2009
    I read your comment about the title in you
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  • From PensievePerson on March 05, 2009
    I can understand authors creating similar protagonists to themselves. I noticed that I did that with both Valerie in
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  • From PensievePerson on March 05, 2009
    Review of Chapter 5:

    Trelawney is such a jerk. She may be clairvoyant, but when it comes to perceiving people
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  • From PensievePerson on March 04, 2009
    I am really happy to hear that Eleanor is not Kirsty Flame. It really annoys me how other fanfic writers I might have read, tend to create the same type of OFCs over and over again! I am glad you like to use different personas for characters. What you
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  • From PensievePerson on February 03, 2009
    Just dropping in to tell you, I'm up to being your beta if you'd like. I'll try to be timely about it and get it done fast. I can do the next chapter or two, but I'm not sure about the whole story.
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  • From PensievePerson on January 07, 2009
    I like this chapter. I think it good that Eleanor got Ravenclaw. Hmmm
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  • From PensievePerson on January 06, 2009
    I really am pleased with the second chapter. I love how you
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  • From PensievePerson on January 06, 2009
    I like how this is going. I can totally picture Eleanor. You did a great job with describing the Romanian atmosphere. Perhaps this story will be even better than The Pains of Becoming! I do hope it will at least be different. I
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  • From PhaedrusTodorov on November 24, 2008
    that was so good! you are a very good writer. I can't wait for more! I dont know about her with lucius though. couldn't she get with one of the Hogwart's boys? I could see her getting reluctantly taken over by Harry's goodness - opposites attract and all that. or I could also see a dark and twisted drama filled affair with Draco. hmmm. well, im sure what you have in mind will be great! good work.
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