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Reviews for Property of Potter

By : twocanz
  • From mattcun on November 16, 2012
    have harry catch him
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  • From ComradeSnarky on July 05, 2011
    I feel like this has some interesting ideas but you don't go into enough depth. It would improve the story if you elaborate more on his feelings for Ginny, I think. I didn't really like the fact that Ginny seemed SO naive and inexperienced - it made it feel too creepy/inappropriate. It would've been better if Sirius started out thinking she was this inexperienced little flower and she turned out to actually be a feisty little minx, totally trying to seduce him from the start. It also seems too convenient that Harry's cheating on her. Like it's just there as a justification for Sirius fucking Ginny. If he's gonna be a bastard, you shouldn't make Harry out to be the villain.

    Finally, watch the verb tenses - you switch from past to present tense quite a few times.
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  • From Karah1988 on July 19, 2010
    Oh wow, that was so hot! I love the whole, 'I'm a bastard' idea by the way. You actually made me enjoy the Lily/Sirius which is a couple that I've never gotten into. I love love loved the Ginny/Sirius though! I encourage you to write more Ginny/Sirius; I would definitely read and review if you did =D Good work.
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  • From pacergal84 on January 08, 2009
    Oh my god! That was amazing. Just gonna leave it right there. LOL
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  • From sankalpdeoxys on November 26, 2008
    Very good written Smut..Simply Loved it.

    Parselmaster
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  • From twocanz on November 25, 2008
    Wow! I've never gotten a compliment like that! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - hmrpotter on November 24, 2008
    OH.
    MY.
    FUCKING.
    GOODNESS.

    That was one of the hottest fics I've read, ever. And I read a lot of smut.
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