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Reviews for Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer

By : pmczarnecki711
  • From sh8ad8ow on January 16, 2010
    great story realy great hope you continue it and update soon.
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  • From danawarner on December 01, 2009
    This is an interesting story. It started off well but as of chapter 9 has become all about sex.
    What is with that anyway? And now Tonks has MPD?
    Your plot seems to have gotten lost along the way and I find myself skipping over the sex to get back to the story.
    11-year-olds should not be THAT into sex regardless. If it was just a ritual aspect to the magic I get, but just sex is a bit much.
    Get back to the meat (no pun intended) of the story.
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  • From SirZic000 on November 27, 2009
    Awesome Chapter!!!
    Continuuuuuuuue,
    Z.
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  • From vipertooth on November 15, 2009
    please update soon
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  • From garsdal on October 05, 2009
    *bows at your feet.*
    your amazing wrighting skills in both extrodnary smut and plot is inspiring. i look forward to the next upgrade.
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  • From MrGalion on September 28, 2009
    The Following has led me to a confusion. Is it Hannah or Susan?


    Evidence for Hannah:
    "It appeared that he would not get there in time as the willow connected with Hannah
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  • From bill560682 on September 27, 2009
    now what would be a screwed up twist to this story is that harry ends up finding out that to bring his mother back he has to have sex with her corpse and then she must become his sex slave that has to be pleasured by him at least once every month or she will die again.
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  • From Tatsuzzmage on September 18, 2009
    as soon as you mentioned the blood thing my mind totality channeled (Spike: "Blood is life, lack-brain. Why do you think we eat it? It's what keeps you going. Makes you warm. Makes you hard. Makes you other than dead. 'Course it's her blood.") as stories like this go im mostly in it for the necromancer aspect. hehe. great story tho.

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  • From tallica343 on September 11, 2009
    Great story. One thing that I don't like however is that they talk so much during sex, first of all its hard to concentrate enough to do and second if you do concentrate enough to hold a conversation then you take away alot of the pleasre you should be feeling by blocking it out. Also Harry seems to let his subbmissives get away with alot, it seems to me that if he is truly as dominant as he is described as being he should be a little more strict and his punishments should be true punishments not pleasurable ones (in other words if spanking gets them off make them do something that they abhor or at least is not sexually gratifying).
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  • From vipertooth on July 23, 2009
    please update soon
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  • From vipertooth on June 22, 2009
    Please update soon
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  • From StevieG on June 20, 2009
    Your story is truly a masterpiece. Its mix between plot and sex is perferct.

    Some suggestions/wishes.

    1. Don't make Harry too powerful too fast. It would be boring if there's no challenge.
    A long time ago, on a website far far away, I read story and, well, it started good, but I thought that jis heroine was more powerful tha Yoda, Obi-Wan, Sidious, Vader, Revan and whover combined. That ruined the story.

    2. Harry should'nt have too many girls so soon. The first year isn't finished and he already has much minions/slaves/apprentices. The only persond that shoudl join is Penny and maybe the two Hufflepuff girls.
    After all, too many girls would distract him from his ambition, wouldn't they?;)

    3. Will the Tri-Wizard-Cup play a role in your story? If so, Harry should definitely make Fleur Delacour one of his apprentices.


    Now, I'm really anxious for the next chapter. How you'll release it soon. ;)
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  • From pfeil on December 14, 2008
    Hot damn, that was a good chapter.

    Love seeing Hermione claiming her spot =)
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  • From Extraho on November 27, 2008
    wow, i gotta say i really love this story. every single word. i was wondering of two things; do you have a mailing list, and if you do, could you add me? (extraho_606@hotmail.com)

    and

    when you have completed the story, could you post the entire thing in one 'chapter' right at the end, so i can copy/paste it into a word document and read it again when i don't have internett access - as i dont quite often. i live on an island, literally. THANK YOU
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