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Reviews for Working Girl

By : ronsmistress
  • From mag7ical on July 13, 2009
    This is one of my favs of your Ron/Pansy stuff. Loved it.
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  • From anncee on January 27, 2009
    love your stuff, just stumbled upon this little beauty. Just had a quick note that caught my attention, near the beginning of chapter 13 you wrote "Hermione said, she
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Chapters 12-16. I'm so glad that guy was caught! What a bum. I did have smile that after Ron told Pansy about what they found they went to make love. lol. Sex cures all things eh..And yay for the book coming out! I love Ron's intro...so sweet and just powerful : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Ch. 12...oh wow, who knew her job would be so helpful to the Auror investigation. Makes perfect sense though. Ron's so sweet : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Ch. 11. HOT!!! Glad she's getting settled in ...heh. lol
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Ch. 10. You would benefit from a Beta. There have been a few spelling and grammar errors throughout, but this chapter has the most....the chapter was really sweet though, I like Ron and Pansy's musings about each other, and the conversation as she gave her walking papers. lol
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Ch. 9. BEAUTIFUL and very HOt. I loved that....very nice : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    ooops, the last one was for ch. 7...this is for Ch. 8. Hermione's sweet, I guess she's mature enough to move past the old rivalry? I wonder how Pansy's friends and family will feel about this book, oh but her parents are dead right? I wonder if they'll be a backlash too? lol@Harry for making sure there's no names listed. so glad Ron doesn't want to share her again, and yay, he's always liked her, that's sweet.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2008
    @Ch. 6. Awwww! that's so sweet of Ron....I hope this works out..
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  • From architect on December 06, 2008
    Very nice and sweet. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work.

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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 06, 2008
    Nice first time threesome for the boys and her. : ) so Harry and Ron don't mind loving up on each other either? this is gonna be interesting..I wonder if she let Harry stay the night anyway?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 06, 2008
    lol@Ron and Harry's conversation. Aww...so they've both been looking to do the threesome thing for awhile. I like that, because it rings true of people looking for one. I like how you're showing another side to Pansy and her writing interests. I think she has quite a story to tell. heh. I think I know where this is going but I can't wait to see it played out.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 06, 2008
    ch. 4. Hmm, I almost envy Pansy, even though as you've shown, she's sad about the consequences of the life she's chosen. I do wonder where this is going, but before that, I can't wait to see the threesome. I wonder what Harry's reaction will be to Ron's suggestion...heh. So Ron is single? I hope he's not lying. The bath was so romantic and hot at the same time.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 06, 2008
    Nice, real nice...loved their first time...very hot. I like how you write Ron...I picture him being large as well : ) and aww, he gets to stay the night : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 06, 2008
    @Ch. 2. Nice...OK, I'm glad you gave more information about why she's doing what she's doing. The attraction between her and Ron is really nice...lol@how much...oh boy...excited about what goes down in Ch. 3.
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