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Reviews for Harry Potter and Another Malfoy

By : famlia
  • From alma on December 15, 2008
    Poor Harry, there's no turning back now!
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  • From mls1971 on December 14, 2008
    great work!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on December 14, 2008
    oh. How sweet! -starry eyes- He finally confessed! I love it. I don't think Harry will be able to say no after that kiss. heh. Another great chapter. Thanks so much for the update.
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  • From ANON - butterpie on December 13, 2008
    So Scorpius has finally come to his senses and realized just how deeply he hurt Harry with his thoughtless and ruthless behavior. It would matter less coming from Draco who has never cared to show any positive type of emotion for Harry, but Scorpius really needs to remember the example of being considered a part of Harry's family where trust and love are freely given and not limited to conditions. I can see that this triangle is going to be an emotional journey of discovery, wonder, and ultimately much sought after love alongside lies, treachery, and deceit as Draco has never cared for another persons needs before satisfying his own first. Harry and Scorpius will face a hard battle from friends and family alike as they seek to share a love that has no definitions on what is right or wrong, but what is the best for themselves in order to live without regret. I can't wait to see what's next so please continue to entrall us all.
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  • From ChibiBerry on December 13, 2008
    Yay..they..sort of made up! How nice! I hope Harry changes his mind about whether he should have a relationship with Scorpious or not...They make such a lovely couple! Thanks so much for the quick update, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm glad, Scorpius didn't beat around the bush..instead he came right out and said it..lol. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for your next chapter. 8D
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  • From alma on December 12, 2008
    It's heating up!
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  • From ChibiBerry on December 12, 2008
    No! Why is Scorpius being so mean to Harry? I hope they make up soon. Wow..you're story is getting so addicting..and so fast too! Great job! You have really good writing skills..you've got me completely hooked! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! 8D
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  • From ANON - butterpie on December 12, 2008
    Wow, talk about confrontational first with the father and then with the son! Scorpius is definitely feeling hurt that his father is cheating on his mom, and with the one person he has most admired ever since he has known his best friend Albus. No doubt Scorpius is deeply in love with his father's not so secret lover, which makes the knowledge of his unexplained betrayal that much more painful. Harry is the ultimate victim here as both of these men seem at odds with their attempts to possess him body and soul, but falter in earning his trust and love. I have truly enjoyed this potent brew of yours, and hope to see it to the ending it deserves. So on that note please continue!
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  • From on December 11, 2008
    Gah. Omigosh dont leave me hanging! Whats gonna happen next? Im dying here. -bites fingernails-
    Update soon please.
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  • From mls1971 on December 11, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From mls1971 on December 10, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - butterpie on December 09, 2008
    This is an excellent story of Harry being the obsession of two Malfoys, but for very different reasons. Draco's reasons are more like a spoiled, petulant child who is never quite satisfied, and full of spiteful malice, which is a shame when compared to his son. Scorpius is the antithesis of his father in everyway as he has earned Harry's trust and respect due to his friendship with Al and brotherly love for Allegra. Somehow Harry has helped to invest Scorpius with a caring heart which will be fatal for Draco I suspect.I hope to see more of this not so little gem of yours soon' so on that note please continue.
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  • From alma on December 09, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From Darkless on December 09, 2008
    Very interesting plotline. I'm liking it, but you have quite a few problems grammatically.

    Sometimes it's hard to tell 'who' is thinking or talking, and you mix person/viewpoints in the same paragraph. When in a conversation, it's best to separate each person's speech with a new paragraph - i.e. :

    John turned to ask, "Hey Joe, did you get my sister's letter?"

    Joe nodded, "Yeah, just yesterday." He closed the door behind his friend and followed him down the hall. "When did she mail it?"

    John grabbed a game paddle and plopped down on the sofa, "I don't know...a couple of days ago, I guess." He started pressing buttons gleefully.

    "Hey!" Joe snatched the paddle away, sat down next to John and said smugly, "My house, my game; I get first player."

    Just one way to avoid confusion as to whom is speaking or doing an action. The first chapter is very run-together and diffcult to understand. I recommend an edit. Another thing you could do is concentrate a chapter or segment in only one person's point of view. On the other hand, your spelling and punctuation is pretty good.

    Otherwise I really like where the story is going. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on December 07, 2008
    I love this story...I also love that you always update a lot.
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