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Reviews for Soul Mates

By : kittykatt4244
  • From ajenni on August 26, 2014
    Oh please continue this i offer cookies!!
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  • From ANON - chyara on March 14, 2013
    Darn, i thought this was finished.

    sighs
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  • From ANON - TempestAmethyst on July 15, 2012
    For the love of all that's unholy, please update this!
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  • From NicoSnape on July 25, 2010
    Very nice. Excited to see more.
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  • From magentasouth on June 18, 2010
    damn... i wish you had continued this fic. I was really enjoying that. and its so nice to read someone who doesnt have spelling and grammar errors or strange linguistic features all the way through. I didnt find much else that you'd written and posted online. its a shame really.
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  • From Popcornbandit on September 28, 2009
    i love the story so far, screw OOC, as long as he is still evil to everyone else xD


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  • From Hajime on September 06, 2009
    awwww.. such a cute fic. pls...do update :)
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  • From Asinah on June 28, 2009
    uhmm when will you update this story?
    Been ages since you've updated and would love to see any new development with Hermy & Voldie.
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on April 13, 2009
    This is, er, *interesting*. The concept is very well and done, but the execution is utter terrible.

    "Random-Dark-Blood-Spell: Here you go! One Dark Lord, now Soul-bound to one Mudbl--er, I mean, Muggleborn. The ministry has been notified, even though this spell is probably forbidden by it, so even if you somehow escape his now-loving clutches, you're fucked. Have a nice life! *poof*

    Hermione: Well. Yes. For some reason, I'm not hyperventilating, or really all that scared. And I find my not-quite human partner (who doesn't even have his entire soul anymore) attractive. Hm, perhaps this is the female variation of that Catgirl fetish guys have? Snakes /are/ rather phallic...

    Voldermort: Urk... Wait, where am I? Why the hell is Potter's Mudblood hovering--oh, she's in the corner now. Where am I, and why haven't I killed the mudblood yet? *reads paper* Well, fuck. This was unexpected and highly unusual. How much of an idiot are you to have preformed this spell without knowing it's full ramifications?

    Hermione: I'm friends with Harry Potter and Ronald Weasley.

    Voldemort: Touche.

    Hermione: So, what now?

    Voldemort: I take you back to my dark castle and have my ravishing way with you, throwing my past prejudices out the proverbial window only not really.

    Hermione: So you're going to screw my brains out or suffer death, and you're still going to kill my friends and family?

    Voldemort: Pretty much yes. But don't worry, I like you, so you're safe from me and mine. In fact, I'll even throw a handy-dandy instant body-guard service in! It'll stop any unwanted 'rescue' attempts, or assassinations that are surely to come.

    Hermione: Sounds good to me. Let me grab my cat real quick."

    I mean, come on. The *concept* is very intriguing. In fact, if I wasn't so lazy, I'd ask permission to use the basic idea (spell for Soul Mates equals Hermione/Voldemort) and make my own story, with a whole darker theme and actually have character development. I don't think I'd make it a NC-17, though, for the shier 'ick' factor a lot of people have for Volde/Anyone pairing, but it'd probably be over a hundred thousand words in place of.

    But I'm lazy, and I've had no less then four different story ideas attack me within the last few days, which I'm never going to get around to working on, I just know it. So I leave it up to those with more dedication then I, and can only critique your work so that perhaps it can be better.

    My suggestion is to have them be far, FAR more reluctant to the soul-bounding thing, but of course be drawn to one another. You can have Voldemort attack her when he finds out what she did, but then let him think it through and decide it's worth at least to keep her around as a fuck buddy, as he finds her body attractive. He tells her of his decision, which she protests, but he stuns her and takes her anyway. And have them leave the castle in some other method, or have her do it in the Shrieking Shack, because the whole Apperating/getting there in the first place is a stupid mistake that takes away character from the story. And, in fact, it'd be unlikely for Hermione to make the potion in the Room of Requirements at all, because she could have been interrupted, and what would her friends say if she was caught doing a dark potion just to find out who her soul mate is? One, she'd be embarrassed someone came upon her while doing it, and two it's a forbidden dark spell.

    Then have her stashed away in Volde's manner, with him occasionally going to her to 'sate his curiosity' or whatnot. You have him become more and more possessive as the time goes on, until he's in love with her as much as his shriveled, blackened heart can. Then you can go and end the story, or branch off and have the Final Battle happen, with I dunno, Hermione sacrificing herself for him, or something. Or Sacrificing the wizarding world for him, or something. I don't know, it's ultimately your story.
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  • From DarkTopaz on April 07, 2009
    you have got to update please I am begging
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  • From JPElliott on March 06, 2009
    I love this story! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Avivafae on February 22, 2009
    I really like this story. Voldemort is a little OOC but it soooo works! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Tinks on February 21, 2009
    I'm really enjoying your story...
    Hope you continue it...
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  • From deviantgirl on February 12, 2009
    OMG UPDATE NOW!
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  • From jasminejoanleigh on February 05, 2009
    looks really good so far, update again soon.
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