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  • From Heidi191976 on July 04, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From voraciousreader on July 03, 2009
    Agh! Too short! that's like getting a movie and finding a coke commercial during the car chase! More, more more...wait, that's Luc's line, isn't it? What ever. Thanks for the compliment, but I do tend to over analyze things. You created the circumstances, i just keep trying to make sense of them.
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  • From dragongirl on July 03, 2009
    This is cliffhanger only is a warning for the intense chapter behind this one.. I can wait!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on July 03, 2009
    Oh, wow, Hermione gets to top Lucius?!?! You are wonderful and this story keeps getting better and better!I'm sure Lucius is going to enjoy this, not just the BDSM play but how this might work into a future for him and Hermione. If he's this much into the scene, it would be hard to be with Hermione in some sort of relationship if he had to leave a big part of himself out of it. But meanwhile, there are traps to bait. Excellent work, but too short. Alas.
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  • From scotsgirl on July 03, 2009
    Wow so Hermione going to get a taste of DOM, I hope she doesn't mind it but stick to how she is at the moment, I like how she is. Looking forward to the next update
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  • From Tazzy on June 27, 2009
    oh Darling, I don't know about anyone else but if you stop this now, I'll have to do something drastic. Like pout at you. Serious pouting mind you with both the big wet eyes and the quivering lower lip.

    *purrs* Besides I want to see Lucious Lucius taken to task *cough* by those lovely ladies of his.
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  • From dragongirl on June 27, 2009
    Please some smut!!!!!!!!! Yeah fire is coming I know but this is so cool.. So where is Larien.. in Narcissa's body? That is all so intense.. Keep them coming...
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  • From zetsuai2005 on June 27, 2009
    Lucius' thoughts are becoming just as full of Hermione as hers are of him. I hope you're building toward a critical mass with that potential relationship. I take it that Liren isn't even in the UK or Ireland, but is still close enough to apparate to the scenes of his crimes. Sounds like Draco has no intention of getting off the case: I'm sure he wants his father's name cleared as much as to stop the gruesome murders. I noticed that you had Lucius pick up his wallet on the way to the Wicked Witch. There must be something there to buy--maybe an appropriate outfit for Hermione to pose as a play partner of Lucius to draw Liren out to kill her? Oooh, I hope Lucius gets to spank her! This story keeps getting better the more complex it gets. Consistently top notch writing. How rare, but welcome!
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 27, 2009
    Excellent. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From bluezauza on June 26, 2009
    I know i should review every chapter, just forgive me for not doing so. English is not my first language and sometimes it's a little hard to find the words to express my thoughts!that makes me a little lazy . There is no forgiveness for me!

    I do love Draco's and Hermione's relationship,he seems to understand her very well,and she is Hermione of course, not always very open to other people's points of view.The world is still very much black and white to our Gryffindor. I always thought that that is one of the Slytherin's best qualities, the ability to understand the subtle nuances behind everything!

    Hmm very promising what is to come...Lucius and to beautiful women... ;D

    But Hermione being used like that for a trap...If Liren is anything like his brother... that doesn't sound good! And why Hermione? Why not Ara? Hmmmmmm....



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  • From LDeakins on June 26, 2009
    I am..enthralled, HP meets CSI, meets Bones..Please continue,, and quickly if you will. I must say that over all it is well writtenm wry, and detailed to perfection.. the tension slowly building is just a delicious temptation I cannot deny
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  • From voraciousreader on June 26, 2009
    Tell Luc to check the estate on Skye, damn it!
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  • From Tazzy on June 24, 2009
    *shakes head* Lucius, that's not gonna solve anything.... really.

    And nice to see what happened between Hermione and Harry. *snerks* and also nice to see her Slytherin side showing...
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  • From on June 23, 2009
    Hi. I'm not exactly new to this site, but I registered for it just now because I wanted to review your story. Basically, I would give it three thumbs up if I had enough thumbs. It's sufficiently enjoyable that I can even pass over the use of the spelling "magick" with no more than a slight roll of the eyes. :) Some of the content (the forensics and some other details, not just the BDSM-related material!) has me curious about this talented author who seems to have such breadth and depth of knowledge (not to mention spelling and grammar so much better than most people's). More than just being knowledgeable, though, you're skilled at putting your knowledge to good use in service of your story. It adds quite a bit of flavour. As an example, you apparently have at least enough knowledge of Latin to make up spells, potions, etc., that fit in nicely with the canon ones. (OK, so that doesn't require a whole lot of Latin.)

    I haven't nearly reached the last chapter (or the latest; don't even know if the story's finished), and I'm glad of it: still got lots to read, confident that I will be entertained. One detail that's got me curious is Lucius's decent treatment of the House-Elves (got a kick out of the RHPS references BTW): I hope we'll see an explanation somewhere along the line for his abuse of Dobby, since it seems that this is not the norm for him. (Is this part of how he has changed over the years? Was there something specific to Dobby that drove Lucius to abuse him? etc.)

    For some reason I found the idea of Lucius as a switch to be especially plausible. Not sure why, though (and I don't usually tend to be a very intuitive person). I like the teenaged Lucius, Narcissa, and Liran, too. Young Cissy really does come across as a ditz. Oh, speaking of Narcissa's goofy nickname, I hope we're going to get a glimse of a teenaged Bellatrix. (If Azkaban turned her psycho, just think what adolescent hormones would do!)

    Well, back to reading! Later dude.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on June 21, 2009
    So, Harry's turning over a new leaf during this Turning Moon! I hope he does something to redeem himself in Hermione's eyes. Ten years!! I'm not so sure Narcissa isn't covering something up, though. Draco and Hermione make a good team, but Lucius is the one she has on her mind. Stand firm, Hermione! Don't let those wizards out of your sight! Good chapter, moving the plot along. Glad you haven't put this one on the back burner.
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