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By : vbruce
  • From BishiMistress on May 31, 2009
    Boy, I sure wish I could just selectively ignore the things about myself that I didn't want to address... Especially concerning people that I'm woefully suckerish for no matter what they do or what they're implicated in.... Who WOULDN'T want to look good for Lucius though?
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  • From crysta656 on May 30, 2009
    I really love this story. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. You are really gifted at keeping the suspense up. Great job !
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  • From Heidi191976 on May 30, 2009
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From margaritama on May 30, 2009
    Interesting play on the characters: the killer getting into Lucius' head and Hermione trying to get into his. It was a lovely game of cat/mouse with each character taking up different helms at different points.
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  • From voraciousreader on May 30, 2009
    Anon above was me, sorry--got kicked off again in the middle of my review.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2009
    Hmm, the possibility of some decent intel, worth nearly getting fried (or oozed, whatever). Each action by the perpetrator is like amold with the object removed: you have to fill the cavity until you can see the impression. He's doing rather a lot to fill that for them. I love Ara, by the way.
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  • From Tazzy on May 29, 2009
    *giggles* I'm still loving Ara. Can't wait to see what happens should someone be stupid enough to attack her.

    *Hugs Lucius* poor guy can't catch a break can he?

    Still loving this totally and completely!
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  • From dragongirl on May 29, 2009
    Ok, getting to the solving point, good, but how about some little smut please.. just a hint... to spice it up..
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  • From bluezauza on May 24, 2009
    Mine ????? Hmmmmm!

    Wonderful chapter! They work very well together! But..if it is Liren who is behind this, wouldn't he know that Lucius is not a man to be underestimated??
    On the other hand... Liren is an arrogant ,self-absorbed wizard, and the Lucius he knows better was always second to him...
    I don't know...yes apparently Liren is the brain ,working hard to destroy Lucius, but i have the felling that there is someone else working in the shadows!

    Very ,very good, as always!!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on May 23, 2009
    Did he actually just call her 'Mine' as in short for Hermione, or as in possessive 'mine'? I guess he wants her to feel comfortable and informal around him, which isn't a bad strategy. If the mask can't be destroyed by magical means then there is hope for it being found--that would at least save another victim having that as her last sight. I like the easy style with which you write; it brings a taste of authenticity to your story that others wouldn't be able to achieve. If you have to have a hiatus we will still be here when you return.
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  • From Heidi191976 on May 22, 2009
    An excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From voraciousreader on May 22, 2009
    Such a setup is both complimentary and condescending. To understand Lucius' capabilities to the point of creating a secondary set of traps is the compliment. To assume to understand him so well as to lead him through them is condescending. Liren expects him to survive and to make it out of danger, as well as Hermione. There is no respect here, he treats them as lab rats in a maze of his devising. The question is when they will climb out and refuse to run the game, that is the only thing that will force him to alter his pattern enough to get caught.
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  • From Tazzy on May 17, 2009
    *cackles* Yes, Hemione, ignore the imminent danger for how good Lucius feels pressed against you. Glad you have your priorities straight.

    *Smirks* If you stop writing now, I'm going to have to take serious action such as pouting at you until you continue.
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  • From Heidi191976 on May 16, 2009
    A great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
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  • From chickaboo on May 16, 2009
    Okay. I'm torn between being ecstatic that you updated and completely peeved at what a teaser that chapter was. lol Seriously though that really was fantastic. I can't wait for more!
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