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By : vbruce
  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 17:
    It seems that no matter how hard I try to find the "Next Chapter" button to click on, I am unsuccessful.....what is wrong with this picture??? I need more...NOW! LOL!
    On to the intimate questions between Lucius and Hermione sitting on a tiny setee...
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 16:
    Okay, let me just try to clear up the huge puddle of drool off of my keyboard......Lucius. Shirtless. With a long spear in hand....Oh wait, more drool! LOL
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 15:
    I am thinking that Narcissa knows about Lucius's twin brother and perhaps is in cahoots with him! What in the world! This is soooo good! Please keep the updates coming ASAP!
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 11:
    I was right! I have a sneaking suspicion now that Lucius's twin maybe didn't die but went a bit mad and is now out for revenge...will have to read on to see, I suppose. Oh darn :-P
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 10:
    I am thinking that Lucius is the mysterious owner of The Gilded Lily....am I correct???
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    Ch 8:
    Things are getting interesting, indeed! Lucius telling people how "lovely" Hermione is is an interesting development.
    Oh, to be Lucius Malfoy's playmate.....*swoon* AND him in the black breeches and the boots...*fans self*....*swoons again*
    This is excellent!
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  • From CoCoM on March 25, 2009
    I am thoroughly enjoying this fic! Your attention to detail, characterization and grammar makes this so easy to read. I like that we will be able to see the relationship develop between Lucius and Hermione (and I am hoping that the Gilded Lily comes into play a bit later on????) and not just be thrown in. Most fics that do this are unrealistic and definitely do not stand out.
    I am wondering if the proprietress of The Gilded Lily is based on Lady Heather from CSI at all?
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  • From BishiMistress on March 25, 2009
    *shudders* why are the bits and pieces always kept in freaking jars. I supposed it's better than... erm... tupperware :/ Love where this is going! It makes me wonder how much Narcissa knows and whether or not she cares. Crazy minds think alike, right? I wonder if Lucius and hermione will end up humping in the library?! AHH! I'm going crazy with... wonder....!
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  • From KellyJCR on March 24, 2009
    I just came upon your story and it is unbelievably good. It is well written and your characters are OOC without being to outrageous. I am a fan of OOC however it becomes tedious when they are a complete 180 of how they were originally written. I like the relationship you have between Draco and Hermione. I just have no idea how your going to get Lucius and Hermione together with Draco being ever present in her life. He already knows far more than he is comfortable with and If Hermione becomes involved all sorts of awkward situations will present themselves. This is really and original plot and I love that you don't have page after page of smut, that becomes boring. This is a brilliant fic and I can't wait to read more. Well done!!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on March 23, 2009
    i can't wait to find out what happens next. Update again and soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From voraciousreader on March 21, 2009
    By the way, please don't let him kill off Tazura, I like her!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 21, 2009
    Rumi has always been a favourite of mine. And like the 'Song of Soloman' much ambiguity can be found in the use of pronouns. I think Lucius is doing a perfect job of courting Hermione without making her feel pressured or cornered. If the villain is indeed Liren, his penchant for sexual sadism toward his victims is founded, I think, in jealousy over Lucius moreso than Narcissa.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 20, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From margaritama on March 20, 2009
    Okay first: Magenta? Columbia? LOL - Rocky Horror, I was LMAO!

    Hm, I swear each chapter is like tantalizing foreplay as we wait with bated breath and pounding hearts to see if the two protagonists made headway. Just delicious little appetizers tempting us for the main course.

    Well Liren, as I suspect is behind all of this, is a sick bastard isn't he? Who is his next target? I need to go back and re-read to see if I can guess. And obviously Liren has his eyes set on Hermione as well but he doesn't understand that she's not someone to be caught unawares. Oh I can't wait for that little 'meeting', I think Hermione might kick his ass a bit.

    Sigh, can't wait for more.
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  • From chickaboo on March 20, 2009
    I love that poem. Fantastic update! I can't wait for more. but I'm getting nervous for all involved. lol
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