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Reviews for Harvest Moon

By : vbruce
  • From voraciousreader on March 20, 2009
    Had a sudden flashback to Snape's collection of pickled creatures in his office--brrr. Lucius reading poetry? Nice. Wonder how he'd do with Donne's 'O Sun'. Great, now how am I supposed to concentrate today? Good set up chapter.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 18, 2009
    What a sweaty, luscious sight that must have been. I'm surprised that Hermione remembered her name much less what she had come for. I'm beginning to think this Liren isn't dead at all, though it seems he might have deserved to be. The smell of danger is thick in the air. Maybe Narcissa should be more concerned. This story is hugely rewarding to read. Excellent writing, even better concept!
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  • From slygriff21 on March 18, 2009
    Oh I am so intregied right now! I can't wait to see what happens next. You have to update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From Tazzy on March 17, 2009
    *grins and purrs* Lucius with his shirt off and working with a spear..... I'm surprised Hermione could even thing seriously about anything with that visual going on.
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  • From margaritama on March 14, 2009
    I rather liked this chapter but was thrown by the poem/song. It just seemed a touch out of place. However, I liked the flashbacks and Lucius getting caught up in his past.
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  • From bluezauza on March 14, 2009
    This story is so fascinating! It gets more and more intriguing each chapter!
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 14, 2009
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From voraciousreader on March 14, 2009
    I'm glad to see Lucius has a means to defend himself; I have a sneaking suspicion he will be in need of it. If you have ever seen Jackie Chan's 'Drunken Master', there is a wonderful sequence of the use of the chinese flexible spear. I found myself thinking of that during your description of his kata exercises. It's one of Chan's earlier films, made for the Hong Kong market.
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  • From chickaboo on March 14, 2009
    Mmmmmmmm. Shirtless Lucius. *Grins lasciviously* Great update, and as always, I can't wait for more!
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  • From BishiMistress on March 09, 2009
    bum-bum bum bum bum bummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. *looks suspiciously at Narcissa* liar liar robes on fire. *humps Draco while no one's looking* I wonder if this is going in the direction I think it's going in, or if I'm delusional or if you're gonna rip the rug out from under me at the last minute! *steps off the rug* ha! more please!
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  • From Tazzy on March 08, 2009
    and the plot thickens.....

    *grabs seeing eye dog* Gonna need one if the plot gets any thicker.

    *grins* Definitely keep it going!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on March 07, 2009
    Okay, i'm thoroghly intreged at this point. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! Pretty please!

    Tiffany
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 07, 2009
    Oops! Hermione is now standing up for Lucius. What an odd change of circumstances, and she did it without even realising she was doing it. She's definitely considering him in a new way. And odd that someone outside the Malfoy family should know or have heard that Lucius' twin may NOT have died at sixteen, but been paralysed. That's certainly a motive and reason to suspect that he may be the one trying to frame Lucius. Great chapter, darkephoenix, well-written and provocative.
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  • From margaritama on March 06, 2009
    I think Narcissa knows more than what she's letting on....I hope we see some Luc/Hermione interaction soon.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 06, 2009
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think that Narcissa is keeping a major secret from her son. I think that Liren is at her home because of what she said before Draco entered the room. I hope that she is careful and doesn't get hurt by him.
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