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Reviews for Harvest Moon

By : vbruce
  • From Tazzy on January 18, 2009
    *snickers* Hermione tries to keep from being prejudiced but it doesn't work at times, does it?

    And poor Lucius, unable to get any play time with Hermione trying to breathe down his neck for answers.
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  • From bluezauza on January 17, 2009
    My,my.She is already jealous, isn't she? And he is so sure of himself! ( and does the man stop his sexual activities,ever? wow))
    And he has been talking about her...hmmm!

    What was the meaning of Bubbles words? *is intrigued*

    I have made a rec of this fiction at The New Library community at Live journal here:http://community.livejournal.com/the_new_library/
    I hope it's OK with you!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 17, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From Madietta on January 17, 2009
    Wow, what a well written story. It's not very often in fan fiction that you find a story written within a certain genre, and written this well for that matter. Since mystery is my favorite genre, I am totally hooked. Excellently rendered, great character interactions, wonderful descriptions, just the right level of suspense. You have my undivided attention. I am very much looking forward to an update. Cheers, Madietta
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  • From SailorSol on January 17, 2009
    WOW!

    My goodness, you certainly know a lot about BDSM. I have rarely seen someone actually display their knowledge of such things in a positive fashion. There are a few, though.

    Very well done story, too. I can't wait to see who the murderer is, although I have a couple of notions.
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  • From margaritama on January 17, 2009
    I was laughing out loud at the end of this chapter: "Hermeione has an odd tendency to interrupt my playtime. I wonder if it
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  • From BishiMistress on January 17, 2009
    Hermione just wanted to go to the manor in the sunconscious pursuit of Naked-As-A-Jay-Bird Lucius. I would too. Do you have directions I can borrow? A nutter house elf, ay? Haven't heard that one before. Though, it seems logical enough. Now I'm all curious what the far-seeing Bubble means. Next chapter! X-D
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  • From Tazzy on January 15, 2009
    and the plot thickens. *giggles*

    Yeah, everything's just a little too pat, but how would he know what Dawn looked like after if he hadn't seen the body first?
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  • From Citten on January 13, 2009
    well she finally found a hicup, didn't she? ;) well two things one great chapter. :) totally want more. next i really do hope that we get lucuius still being the domonate one, i like it better. :) (though i wont object to you have hermione trying it at least once. :) but what can i say i am more of a sub myself. :) so i just perferre to have some one else be incharge, espically if it was someone like lucius!) please update soon and let us know what happens!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 11, 2009
    I am really loving this story. What little HP fanfic I had read years ago was certainly not in the league with this. I like Draco and Hermione as friends and partners. Draco's showing a softer side, and Hermione is getting respect every way she turns. Yes, what an image burned into her brain. I confess I would be so busy looking at his buff body I wouldn't have noticed the marks on his back. So ... a switch. Wow! Lucius is getting more and more interesting! And so is this story! Thanks for tipping me off that a new chapter was up.
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  • From bluezauza on January 10, 2009
    Oh very good! Very, very good! He is not the murderer of course, even Hermione can see that!

    And ...why do i get the feeling that he enjoys playing both roles? hmmm!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 10, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens now that Hermione has figured something out that might help.
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  • From margaritama on January 10, 2009
    First off, great explanation of a healthy D/s relationship - I'm sure its a foreshadowing. However, I do not see Lucius as a sub - sorry.

    Now, onto the story. Love the detail and methodical thinking that is going into the writing. I feel like I'm watching a thriller genre film with Rachel Weisz as the female lead "cop." Really, its quite enjoyable.
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  • From BishiMistress on January 10, 2009
    Wouldn't it be lovely if Lucius were the murderer and he were sentenced to be Granger's slave for the rest of his life? Ahhh..... Would that I were Granger. Or that I had Malfoy Sr.'s hair. And after that kinda conversation, she's daring to corner him alone, eh? Niiiiiice.... more more more!
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  • From voraciousreader on January 09, 2009
    Not so odd. I'm sure a very upset elf summoned her master to see what she'd found. Tweak did say she'd informed her master, didn't she? It would be only natural for him to check it first before calling the aurors. I also love that image of Lucius bound to that bar, by the way.
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