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Reviews for Harvest Moon

By : vbruce
  • From zetsuai2005 on March 03, 2010
    Ohhh, who is this mysterious female who is helping Liren. This was a brilliant chapter, darkephoenix! It's too bad Liren can SEE that Lucius has feelings for Hermione. That makes her even less safe. It feels hopeless that Liren will ever be caught and life to become rosy for Lucius and Hermione, but this wand angle might turn up something. I hope so!
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  • From voraciousreader on February 26, 2010
    A physical presence, then. He's been loose for a minimum of two years: One to recover from stasis and relearn the world and its' current political and social landscape while plotting, and another to begin the murders while refining his technique. Of course, that assumes that he was NOT a serial killer (at least of humans) before undergoing stasis. Given the patterns of the killings, that seems unlikely--they need to check older killings during Voldie's uprising. I'll bet anything Liren and Abraxas left a trail; Liren is too used to working with help. He attacks alone, but from cover or disguise--that could be useful. His behaviour is unusual for a twin, very few are this agressive to the other half of themselves.
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  • From Tazzy on February 26, 2010
    *cackles* Tit for Tat, Mr. Draco malfoy.

    And lovely to see Liren being his usual psychotic self...

    Is it a specialty among the Black women to fall for psychos or are Narcissa and Bellatrix special?
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  • From winter748 on February 22, 2010
    Hey, variety is the spice of life. There is nothing "wrong" with a romantic story with hints of hot sex. It gets your readers to use their imagination instead of having it all handed to them. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story, both the romance and the mystery. More Snape though, please. Thank you.
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  • From Tazzy on February 21, 2010
    *grins* Oh yes. Romance instead of smut is always nice. That, of course, doesn't mean I won't take the smut. *smirks*

    and the conversation between Mione and Lucius is lovely and heartfelt.
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  • From dragongirl on February 21, 2010
    That was sweet and melting!!!!!!!
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  • From mrequecky on February 21, 2010
    Liked :D
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  • From chickaboo on February 20, 2010
    There was something about Hermione's response to Lucius at the end that was just so perfect. I loved it. I can't wait for more!
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  • From voraciousreader on February 19, 2010
    Never apologize for adding emotional depth to your stories instead of simply going for PWP. Each has their place, depending on one's mood. the additional detail of their feelings will certainly add layers to it when they do decide to get together. Anticipation, after all, is a form of foreplay all its' own. I'm glad she felt comfortable enough to at leat be honest with him. I'm also glad you updated early!
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  • From Tazzy on February 15, 2010
    oooh! Nice to see that Lucius has someone who is intelligent enough to catch the clues when they're tossed in her general direction.

    *smirks* I have a feeling that the one who hurt Taz is going to regret that move should Lucius get ahold of them. Even more so since they dared to touch Mione.
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  • From mrequecky on February 14, 2010
    Oh, loooved Hermione's last statement :D
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  • From voraciousreader on February 13, 2010
    Gods, I wish I could keep track and make use of so many subtle details as you do--my stories are rather simplistic when I compare them to yours. Andrew's involvement puts a light on things that Hermione will have to consider, especially if she allows herself a deeper involvement as well. By the way, thanks for updating early, I was hoping for something to think about this weekend.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on February 13, 2010
    Have we seen Andrew before in this story? I like him and he adds to the scene (no pun intended) in the hospital immensely. Not to downplay Lucius' superior talents, but I also see that he has a way of drawing the appropriate--for the task at hand--people together around him. Don't know why I like seeing Harry so off put, but I do. Excellent chapter! Why do they have to be so short??!!
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  • From Padfootsgrl on February 13, 2010
    the last line was the greatest line!! lol. very good chapter.
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  • From voraciousreader on February 08, 2010
    I hope you check the reviews regularly, because I had another epiphany. You may want to remove this one. After Liren is done torturing his brother enough to bring about a rather bloody confrontation, I'm guessing he's going to be looking to move to genetically suitable quarters, so to speak? Otherwise his baiting Lucius into a frothing mass of vengeful rage isn't doing a hell of a lot, and he's too intelligent to have all of this be for mere amusement, no matter how sick his head is (even if the head he's using isn't his). He would get a lot of satisfaction from turning the tables on Lucius, after all these years.
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