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Reviews for Hallelujah - A Christmas Story

By : StarKneazle
  • From MaskedLily on November 14, 2010
    This was so cute!! It had me smiling and so happy by the end. Fabulous job =)
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  • From shadowchsr on August 03, 2010
    This was a very sweet story and I truly enjoyed reading it. It most certainly falls into the WAFF category. I think the only thing--at least the only thing that I felt was missing a bit--was a scene or two that would really show a mental connection between Lucius and Hermione beyond the physical attraction. The pancakes in the diner was really sweet and I think a great ice breaker, to see someone as rigidly controlled as Lucius to take a simple delight in something like chocolate chip pancakes. I would have just liked to have seen them connect on another level before they became intimate as well. (I know I'm a picky little thing) Aside from that it was a really good heartwarming story and a bit of a tearjerker. I think you balanced both the love and grief that Lucius felt and really humanized his character and portrayed him as a person I could see Hermione falling in love with. I know writing is your creative outlet only when you have the time to put pen to ink--or rather, hand to keyboard--in your spare time and only as the muse allows but I do hope you find the time to write some more. Especially if you are putting out works similar to this. I'd love to read a longer Lucius/Hermione paring by you her even Severus and Hermione. (I seem to have a similar affection for pairing Hermione with mare mature wizards though I was never fond of her and Sirius) I know this story is still lacking the epilogue but I do think it stands well without one and even so, I do hope to see one someday as well as the completion for your other works. Take care and I hope the creative muse stays with you.
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  • From on December 13, 2008
    Oh, I just loved this! I have had an awful holiday season so far, so thanks for helping me be happy for a while! Hope you had a good break!
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  • From ANON - Lilalandra on December 12, 2008
    Just read chapter 2, have to stop there for now...bed is calling. ;) I like what I've read so far. After reading chapter 1, I was disappointed because I like the part about how they get to be together best in these type of stories. So I was very glad you went back in time and told that in the second chapter. I do hope you will not wait to long in continuing 'the storm' though...
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  • From Tenar10r on December 12, 2008
    Good luck on your final. This has been a delightful story.
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  • From Sampdoria on December 12, 2008
    Brilliant, I am so happy Hermione and Lucius are back together. Poor Lysander though, his little heart will probably break when finding out that Hermione has another boyfriend:-))
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  • From ANON - ffpoisongirl on December 11, 2008
    I like it so far! The whole "break up and get back together" is a refreshing change on the 'ship. Can't wait for more!
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  • From GammaOrionis on December 11, 2008
    Artemis, Selena, and Luna all are names of Greek/Roman moon goddesses. I like it.

    That was so sweet and darling.

    There is one strange thing to me. Pancakes. Pancakes are only show up one a year in the UK. Shrove Tuesday...so them eating pancakes at Christmas is weird...but it is your story...and I like how sweet it is.

    Hermione is stubborn...poor Lucius...I'm just glad that he saw her and knew that she was there
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 11, 2008
    They're all moon goddesses, of course. Good chapter, love the exposition.
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on December 10, 2008
    i think this story has a lot of potential, and i look forward to seeing where it goes next. i would certainly love to see more of the history with hermione and lucius, and how his depression and drinking pushed hermione away...
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  • From GammaOrionis on December 10, 2008
    I would like to take a moment to say: No man deserves the woman that he has. But Lucius needs her...she is just stubborn and wicked!

    Joking....

    Well, I love this. It is so sweet! *pouts* I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From daisymaeevans on December 10, 2008
    Wow-this chapter's even better than the first one. Yay for fast updates!
    Hugs-
    Daisy
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  • From Sampdoria on December 10, 2008
    Thank you for another great chapter to this story! I really like this, and I absolutely love the idea of getting one chapter each day until Christmas, it sure makes the waiting time more enjoyable when you have the pleassure to read a great story while waiting:-))
    I look forward to read more!
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  • From Gertie on December 09, 2008
    I agree- it really is a lovely story and I can't wait to see where it goes. Please keep updating.
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  • From daisymaeevans on December 09, 2008
    I'm already captivated-can't wait to read more! (BTW, "Hallalujah" was written by Leonard Cohen. Great songwriter, not so great singer: which is why his songs are usually covered by others.) Thanks for a great story!
    Hugs-
    Daisy
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