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Reviews for Scarred Souls

By : iluvmysato
  • From mrequecky on February 21, 2010
    Yay, loved!!!
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  • From PantherRain on February 18, 2010
    Darn. No more to read.

    I will be honest first. The beginning seemed a little rushed. It was too much at once, and could easily be skimmed by without much loss. It's a problem I have with my own writing, and the main reason I still haven't read the first Harry Potter book, so please don't think I'm meaning to be harsh. The overall premise was good, however. A little less ranting, or something to slow the pace a little in places that could use it would make quite a bit of difference.

    Later chapters I think were better formed, but you also had room to expand it without the fire of the other two. The pacing is nice and creates something that sets a more realistic image of how and when things are happening.

    The singing head made me remember my own childhood amongst those songs, including a 6th grade teacher who played along with us as the entire class sang the song that never ends during a rainy-day recess. Once in Disneyland on a field trip the teacher threated that if any of us were late to a meetup checkin, they would be subjected to the Small World ride with her. I really did feel sorry for Snape. And the cauldron had me dying. It almost seemed like something Hermione would pull.

    So far, so good. I look forward to future chapters.
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  • From mrequecky on February 17, 2010
    Uiuiui... Loved the chap!
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  • From ANON - Alleyneko on February 16, 2010
    lmao! The image of a cauldron with 2 feet running around spewing insults at snape is one of the most funny images I've had in my head for a while. Why cant snape understand he must use finess and seduction to get what he wants. I cant wait to see if he figures out this concept next chappy. update soon please!
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  • From tyree on February 16, 2010
    Gods....Snape is just so so so ....I caint even think of a proper name for him....my God you've done a great job thus far... please keep up the awesome work.
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  • From llyoung on February 16, 2010
    Harry really is a horrible parent and well on the way of raising spoiled brats for kids. The talking heads thing has really gone on long enough too.
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  • From ANON - Kate on February 16, 2010
    Love the story just floored by how bad of a parent Harry is. Ginny must have been the "mean" parent. My four year old nephew cleans up after himself (not well but he does). Harry now knows they lie to him and have done things to Snape but still doens't look like he's going to punish them at all. Snape is still snarky but even without the floating heads I can see why he's getting to frustrated. I hope he steals all their toys while they sleep.
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  • From mrequecky on February 14, 2010
    Oh oh... That went totally by Snape... He just cannot be nice for once...
    Excited about the next chapters :D
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  • From ANON - Wynja on February 11, 2010
    I love this story! I'm a very bad reviewer, though, sorry about that! I can't read text on the screen for long, because I work in front of a computer all day as it is, so I usually print the stories I want to read, and then I forget to review the next day... bad me! Aaaaanyway, love Snape, love Harry, and adore the kids... I would have killed them by now, but... well.. ;) WHat a HORRIBLE spell to put on someone! Poos SNape! Okay, so he's no angel, but... well... the pink hair was bad enough! ;)
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  • From mrequecky on February 09, 2010
    Loved the updates! Excited about more :D
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  • From ladyedgecombe on February 08, 2010
    I can't wait to see his reaction to finding out the only thing keeping him out of Grimmauld is the consumation of the bond. I wonder how Severus is going to approach Harry about that? Perhaps Harry could just grant him entry with the sex thing. should be very amusing.
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  • From ANON - Ladieraie on February 06, 2010
    WOW! I wasn't sure at first if I would like this story or not but now I find myself "hooked". I like the give and take between Harry, Sev and the Boys. I love the fact that the kids aren't backing down. They aren't mean kids just determined to protect the family. :)
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  • From ANON - Alleyneko on February 06, 2010
    YAY!!! please update soon I must see what happens to poor sniviling snape. I want to know when they'll "consumate" the mating. so many questions and not that many answers. more please!
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  • From saeadame on February 05, 2010
    Hum... I was kind of enjoying the story more at the beginning, but the talking heads thing has just been drug on, and on... and on. It's really dragging the story down because there is no forward movement because there's the Snape, being very angry over these talking heads, who aren't really doing anything to change his mind about anything, just tormenting him. I don't see the point of them, at all, actually, an I think I could have accepted them for a chapter or something, but this "dragging out" is just making the story increasingly boring for me. I mean, if you were moving the story forward in other ways, it would be fine, but it seems like the heads are creating a plot hurdle that keeps it stagnant. Would really, really appreciate it if you could move things forward, even an inch or two, in the next chapter.

    Thanks for the update =).
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  • From ANON - oneric on February 03, 2010
    It is more angsty than I expected but really good. I'll go back to reading. Just wanted to tell you that you're doing a great job.
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