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Reviews for No Looking Back

By : nastygrl
  • From slygriff21 on February 16, 2009
    Yay! Now things can foreword for Hermione and Lucius! I can't wait to read more!

    Tiffany
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  • From margaritama on February 15, 2009
    And Lucius iiiiisss BACK!
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  • From ElvisJesse on February 15, 2009
    Grr!! Stopping it like that deserves a punishment. Update soon!
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  • From dynonugget on February 14, 2009
    I know what I hope is coming next (and who!) *snickers*

    Lucius' wrath must be a spectacle to behold. And that divorce was freaking fast!!!

    I like his concern for Gobby too.

    And that kiss! *dies*
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 11, 2009
    I have been reading and not reviewing...bad me! I apologize. I wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story and I look forward to loads more really soon. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From dynonugget on February 11, 2009
    Holy freaking HELL. I love this chapter. It's smutty, yes, but it also gives Lucius some clarity into what Hermione is about, what she needs. There is an understanding with Severus, they both know it was only physical, only friendship. Lucius holds the keys to her heart and he'd better do something about it! LOL! Good show!
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  • From slygriff21 on February 11, 2009
    Oh wow. Poor Lucius. And poor Severus. I mean he in a sense betrayed his best friend. However I can see both his and Hermione's sides. I can't wait to see what Lucius does next! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From margaritama on February 10, 2009
    I feel rather frustrated at Lucius. Feeling betrayed? I think not sir. Before being obliviated he pushed her away - rejected her. She sought comfort, she's a flesh and blood woman. Now, he's inadvertently playing with her emotions. I'm surprised she hasn't handed in her resignation yet. It would serve him right of course.

    I think Sev and Hermione have nothing to regret - they were both free. Lucius' latent possessiveness is tiresome. It goes back to what will he do? He knows he wants her - as he did before (and I do believe he did) - but will he push her away again or take a risk? If I were Hermione I'd take a bit of a break from big bad Lucius. Making him work for it a bit.

    Great chappie.
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  • From slygriff21 on February 08, 2009
    Uh-oh. What is Lucius going to see when he looks in the pensieve? I can't wait to find out. Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From dynonugget on February 06, 2009
    Another great chapter! I'm intrigued what Severus and Hermione did. Just snuggle? Snog? Get drunk and cry themselves to sleep? What? And what will happen to Lucius when he sees it at last? And what's up with Gobbert? I'm glad to see Lucius green with jealousy. It can be a very good motivator. How will he get rid of Narcissa though? He's still married, and I want to know what Narcissa is up to, and what that one business man has to do with things! Good show!
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  • From margaritama on February 06, 2009
    Well Dari darling, the tension in that second seque was palatable! No really - you could cut it with a knife. Sev seemed . . . tired, yes? I think he's been playing gopher between these two for some time and is rather at his wits end with Lucius.

    The Gobby scene was a much needed injection of humor. Lucius was starting to be rather morose with his lack of memories and desire for Hermione. Hermione continues to live on the fringe of his life it seems. She has one foot in the room but the rest of her is outside looking in. I'd like to see her tentativeness change a bit. If Lucius won't give himself then remain strong girl -- a good dose of jealousy is what this man needs. Get the gorgeous Granger a date for merlin's sakes! :-)

    Another great chappie babe - and hey lemons come as they should.
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  • From margaritama on January 30, 2009
    Well, pieces are starting to fall into place. I see what MIGHT have happened...but will wait patiently for you to unfold all.
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  • From slygriff21 on January 30, 2009
    Okay this story is by the far the most....AMAZING piece I have read in a while!

    You are a talented writer and i love how you have pieced this together. What i love most is how you have brought the wizarding and muggle worlds together through buisness. Yes you have Lucius and Severus OOC, but somehow still in Character at the same time. You have written their characters to evolve as their lifes evolve after the war.

    I wonder what Lucius is going to do now? Will Harry and Ron find the man who Oblivated him? Will Hermione and Lucius become lovers? I can't wait to read more and I hope you update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 29, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From dynonugget on January 29, 2009
    Ok, first of all, Lucius taking care of his erection in the shower was just... *dies*. What an opportunity that could have been! But that's okay, I imagined quite deliciously all by myself. LOL.

    "After all, this witch would one day carry on the Malfoy legacy." I know you meant Draco's fiancee, but I wanted that to mean Hermione, too!

    Just about my favorite line is, "I am torn between congratulating her and inquiring if she has taken leave of her senses." LOL! That is SO Lucius!!!

    Another fab chapter. You're doing a delightful job with this!
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