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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From QueenB on August 28, 2009
    Ch. 6 I
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  • From QueenB on August 28, 2009
    Ch. 5 Maybe it wasn't especially practical, but Harry wouldn't put it past Snape to do something of the sort. However, met with Hermine's accusing gaze, Harry decided that now wasn't the most opportune time to say that.

    I remember in the books how often Harry would bite his tongue when listening or talking to Hermione. One of her main faults was that she was, as Snape stated, an insufferable know-it-all. But attached to this attitude was her often unstated opinion that she was always right, the biggest pitfall of intellectuals. When Harry was having problems using a wand that wasn
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  • From QueenB on August 28, 2009
    Ch. 4 Marietta Edgecombe - I remember that whiny little cow! It was a good twist having her show up here. I'm not surprised she's still holding a grudge. But she seems to have posited herself as the innocent victim. Typical. But I liked the interchange between her and Harry. The dialogue just snapped. Snape's reaction was moving as well. Recovery for him is going to be hell, I just know it. I'm glad Harry is there for him.
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  • From mrequecky on August 27, 2009
    I love how you are so thorough and consequent. It makes so much sense that Diggory would try to punish Neville for his connection to Severus.
    Also, I like the idea of business partners a lot :D
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  • From QueenB on August 27, 2009
    Ch. 3 This is a harrowing chapter and I sense there's worse to come. I'm looking forward and dreading it. I can't leave a longer review; my time at the computer is almost up. But I'll be following this story.
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  • From QueenB on August 27, 2009
    Ch. 2 Sleeping in Snape's bed...with Hermione. All right, it's going to be tough fantasizing about that. But I can try. ;P
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  • From QueenB on August 27, 2009
    Stories dealing with the supposed last moments of Snape's life always pull me in right from the start. Most people refuse to believe that a man so gifted with potions wouldn't prepare a contingency plan for a snakebite. I find myself extremely avid to know what happens next. I'm only sorry that slash sex isn't going to play a major part. Sex between Harry and Severus is always welcome!
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  • From ANON - Rin on August 27, 2009
    What I love most in your texts is their realistic quality. You don't do just slash. You create a strikingly real world in which real men and women are living, breathing, having their pleasures and grieves along with their mundane everyday chores)) And the whole thing just as trustworthy as the real life is. Thank you! I love POL))))))
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  • From starstruck86 on August 27, 2009
    Oooh does Neville's heave-ho have anything to do with Severus? I find the idea of him and Severus working together immensely amusing though, but something that could work out very well if they want it to.

    Lovely update, it's nice to see Harry still being welcomed by the Weasleys, even if Percy is a twunt.

    xx
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  • From KillingProphet on August 27, 2009
    I can't believe this but I actually started crying at the end. Harry looking Ginny and being worried about looking his family that went with it really hit home. That is what happened with me when I dated and broke up with my best friend since seventh grade. I lost him and his horde and it was aweful.
    So you should feel special you have the power to make me cry which very few authors do.
    Update soon,
    Kp.
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  • From Elisabetta611 on August 14, 2009
    Superbly beautiful. I read both of your novel length stories tonight and even though WIPs make me edgy, I just had to read this. And I love it. The first few chapters tore at my heart. Glad to see Severus being more of his snarky, superb self now. But he still has so many wounds and fears that are festering... I just want to hug him. Harry is doing very well. (My heart went out when Ginny told him about the divorce)

    Please update soon!!!
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  • From tar on August 11, 2009
    I just love this story, each time I see it's been updated i swear i do a little jig.
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  • From CodyMThomas on August 10, 2009
    ^_^ luna just gains more awesomeness with every single chapter. I adore her in this story. and Diggory is making my fingers itch to choke his neck. ooooh that man is beginning to not make me care that his son was an incredibly decent fellow. I want Harry to be able to find the resurrection stone, bring back Cedric and have him haunt his father until the man goes mad.
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  • From ANON - goldsnitcher on August 10, 2009
    Severus' depression is somehow bothers me ((( I could guess that it is due the lack of Harry's touching((( And I feel the storm's coming(((( I think it's Diggory's plot to use Severus as a bait((((((((

    Thank you very much! I am waiting for what comes next! Your story is just beatiful!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 09, 2009
    Great update, love it. Sorry I cant seem to come up with better reviews but I really am enjoying this
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