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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 19, 2009
    Ch. 24. Awesome....a threesome pile, the one Ginny sarcastically threw out when this thing started. That was FUNNY! I love Ginny in this story, she's very likeable, much more so than in the books. I was like "yeah you go girl' when she told off Rosmerta. OK< yeah, Sev had a point about Draco doing the Unforgiveable but come on! he was a kid...and he's apologetic and trying to help Sev! Poor Draco..that must have felt awful. I love the whole gang coming together and making the best of a rough situation and using humor through it. Although I said I hope they wouldn't find the stone, I'm a bit worried about it as well. yay for Sev joking more. He and Harry seem to be building a genuine relationship.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 19, 2009
    @Ch. 22. I really liked this chapter...mostly because of the depth of thought Sev expressed at the beginning and the humor at the end. Freedom for what is a such a good question. Life is as good as its ever been for him right now. He must be secretly terrified to be set free. I'm really glad Harry put some of that fear to rest and offered to keep him after he was cleared. I think he really needed that. I love how in character everyone is, and now that they're all there searching for the stone it feels sorta like old times but not, you know. I love that Sev is getting his snark back a little, even if its accidental. Harry checking in on him is so sweet. Luna's comment at the end was just priceless. This chapter really made smile, is bad that I kinda don't want them to find the stone? : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 19, 2009
    @Ch. 21. AWWW, I'm LOVING the development of Marietta as a character. You never see her in fanfic and she was totally destroyed in the books, you're like totally redeeming her. I love her frankness and her spirit. She's really refreshing to read. Great writing there Em. Its really disturbing to think about the whole Dementor's Kiss thing...the explanation Marietta gave sounds spot on...really, what is the point? awful. And wow, now we find out Harry IS bi : ) Woo-hoo, let the games begin!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 19, 2009
    @Ch. 21. Yay, Luna got Sev out of the house and working, and EATING...Major moves there. At first she was pissing me off but I'm glad to see she had a plan. How could I ever doubt her. LOL@her suggestion of dating Marietta...foreshadowing? Pisses me off that people are sneering at Sev, after all he's been through...bastards. So is Draco avoiding Sev or is he imagining things and its sorta sad he felt nothing about Lucius passing. I am glad he got to get his old things. yay for progress :)
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  • From mrequecky on April 17, 2009
    Wow, totally loooove this story! Just caught up and like it plenty!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 16, 2009
    I hope they find something soon, great update
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 16, 2009
    so short! that was nearly a teaser! ooooh I have such an impatient nature, I'm just desperate to read more. I hope you can update again soon!
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  • From knj4k4 on April 15, 2009
    His patronus is going to change into something to represent Harry.
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  • From BMSORabbit on April 04, 2009
    I love this story...although this chapter is full of angst! haha! Were you angry while you were writing it? It seems you may have been!
    I can't wait to see if they find the stone!
    Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - sandfull_a on April 02, 2009
    Thank you. It was a great chapter. And the last passage was hilarious!!
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  • From ANON - anon on April 02, 2009
    Wonderful. Love the dialog. Great to see Harry considering.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 02, 2009
    Great chapter, its nice to see the old Severus coming back somehow
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  • From KillingProphet on April 01, 2009
    As much as I love this story I wish Ginny would fall off the face of the Earth... She is moving Harry's eyes away from Snape. -Pouts-
    It is a wonderful story, as always. I look forward to your next chapter.
    KP
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  • From ANON - Sasza on March 13, 2009
    I like your story very much. It's amazing! Please update soon, I can't wait for the next part:)
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  • From 12blue12 on March 13, 2009
    aww that was awesome i cant wait for the next update!
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