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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From callistianstar on February 01, 2009
    Really lovely chapter. Of course I hope that the comfort Severus found in Harry's touch to be at least somehow related to Harry-himself, and not just to the slave bond (which I'm not entirely sure if that has anything to do with it). Really interesting to see Severus in such a panic, believing that the war is still happening (which it "is" but without Voldemort). The Ministry is really full of dummies, the way they stick to the book and protocol. It makes sense that Harry can't be allowed to see them sort of, since he picked them up, and has reason to hurt them severly (beyond the call of duty), but the way it is being handled, I hope Harry or someone can find the time to figure a few things out from the surviving prisoners.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 01, 2009
    This story is freaking FANTASTIC! Wow! I don't know how many hours I have been sitting here just reading through all of these lovely chapters hoping that they would never end so that I would never have to stop. This is a very well written and thoroughly involving story, and I happily admit I'm hooked. I can't wait for the next update, do you do Update Alerts for this story? If so could you please add me to your list? my email is Emeraldfairy18 @ hotmail.com. I don't want to miss a single second of this!
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  • From gentlenightrain on February 01, 2009

    I absolutely love it! Please update when you have a moment... :)
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on February 01, 2009
    Great updates. At least Severus is somehow getting better but I get the feeling that Harry's life is about to take a turn and I dont know which direction
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  • From ANON - SarahAlex on January 31, 2009
    Perfect as usual.
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  • From Darkless on January 26, 2009
    Progress! And in a good way, too. Good to see Severus' personality beginning to emerge, less a ghost of himself. Still, he's a long way off from snarkiness. Besides, how much of all that vitrol was part of his mask, his role to play? Fascinating.
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  • From callistianstar on January 25, 2009
    Harry really surprised me in this chapter. The boy definitely needs some sleep. It felt strange that seconds after feeling guilty for being rude to Luna, he would reply "snidely" to her regular "out-there" comments. And really you do like to surprise don't you? Mere seconds after I was relieved that the meeting with Diggory did not go haywire, the Dementor's Kiss issue was surprising. Though Lovely Bones had a "happy" ending, the idea of the Kiss always makes me shudder a bit. Even if these people were those that tortured Snape. While I'm curious as to why Draco did not show up (worried about seeing his godfather so reserved? or busy finding a cure?), I do hope Harry gets his head back on. I hope he remembers to take care of himself soon. Great chapter.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 25, 2009
    Awww, Luna is a sweety...I really like how you wrote her, and she's very IC. I love her reading to Sev, and their conversation about those that were lost was sobering. I like how she recounted who died no distinguishing between the dark and light. Poor Harry, I feel his pain, not liking Diggory at all. Interesting with the interrogation, can't wait to hear more about that...and what's up with Draco not showing up to look after Sev. I hope everything is OK, that doesn't seem like him.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 25, 2009
    @17 AWWW! I love Luna's gift to Sev, and Harry needs to lighten up. He has some nerve snapping at her for bringing Sev a cat. He needs something, doesn't he listen to Ginny? by the way, I love how you're portraying Ginny. She's rational and go her head on straight, which is a quite different from most Snarry's. I actually like her a lot. It seems that Harry could have avoided a lot of trouble if he had sought out some advice and talked to his wife. lol. Well, I guess it's all for the best, now we get a nice Snarry. I was touched when they took Lily furniture shopping, and I think that Lily is adorable. I love the conversation about Sev being "found". I love the voice prompted furniture. Lots of neat little things in this chapter. Great chapter Em.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 24, 2009
    Tripod - an old joke name put to the best use. I love it. The poetry is wonderful, the progress because of Luna and the other caretakers tangible.
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  • From ANON - DTDY on January 21, 2009
    Self petting cat.
    Great chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2009
    I love this story so much. We were all so spoiled by the constant updates over break that I find myself checking up on it every day in order to see if its been updated again! I can't wait to see more chapters.
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  • From liza on January 18, 2009
    tripod. rofl. that's just priceless. so irreverant and so luna. i really enjoyed the conversations in this chapter. there's such a reality to their world and the situations they find themselves in. like ginny mentioned, they exist in the gray area. there's no simple black and white problem solving. i find myself loving your harry. he's so endearing and irritating at the same time. he moves snape in without even consulting his long suffering wife and yet wigs out when luna brings a cat home. ha! that's just so like him. your characterization is excellent. i've read many stories where the author seems to give all the players the same personality. so it's like the author is simply talking, using the characters' mouths. it all sounds exactly the same and lacks depth. but you, you seem to understand the subtle differences in the characters. you pay close attention to how several different personalities would go about saying the same thing. how would luna, ginny, hermione or marietta tell harry he was wrong? they would all approach it differently based on who they are and their relationship to him and you recognize this. it's refreshing and makes for an enjoyable read. great work :D
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 18, 2009
    Luna is wierd and I like that. The ending was cute and I think Tripod really helped Severus
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  • From pontaloon on January 17, 2009
    fantastic! im absolutely in love with lily (in a totally non pedophile obsession way) but there are some passages that really could have used more description. im mostly thinking of harry's house when i say that. the first time we see it, there isnt a whole lot of developpement as to what it looks like. either way, update soon!
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