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By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Josie on January 17, 2009
    So glad to see this update, it totally made my day. I love the cat haha it was a great idea to add him into the mix. I'm interested to see what happens with Harry and Ginny, this being a Snarry and all. Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Alesia on January 17, 2009
    You have an amazing storytelling talent!!!! I've been checking your site twice a day for the past week waiting for Ch. 17! And it was DEFINITELY worth waiting for!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2009
    i love tripod... a very sweet idea of helping sevrus develop new feelings...
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  • From ANON - isadax on January 17, 2009
    Let me guess : you have a cat, haven't you ? That's a very nice idea.
    and i like how you make Ginny act in a bright and kind way.

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  • From callistianstar on January 17, 2009
    Very sweet chapter. I admit, the moment with Ginny got me irritated at both Harry and Ginny. For Ginny to be scolding him about the slave bond...good. To win his wife back, I couldn't believe that he'd try to take credit for Snape's work. I can't imagine that being revealed kindly among the other members working together to rehabilitate Snape. But then for Ginny to scold Harry about spending money, when it was her and her family (along with charity and Hogwarts) that he gave his money... If she is going to get angry at Harry for inviting the cat...honestly. This is such a wrong time for her to finally decide she's had enough. She sounds like an ignorant little girl, about as ignorant as Harry is about the slave bond (though about different things). Luna at the end, and Severus with the cat was really sweet though. I like how you described those last couple scenes. Great job with this chapte.r
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  • From ANON - Josie on January 16, 2009
    Okay, I'm not going to lie, this is the best story I've read in a long time. You go into great detail, and I love that everything isn't rushed. I'm going to be checking for updates, haha can't even wait to see more of this.
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  • From ANON - RoxieRose on January 14, 2009
    I find myself liking this fic more and more as I read....it is well written and evenly paced....good work
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  • From ANON - Ellie on January 13, 2009
    I love this story and always read it either here or at ff.net. This is the first time I've reviewed on either forum and the reason is to ask a question. In the books it's stated that Dumbledore has *more than one portrait.* And we know that portrait dwellers (pd) can move to where ever their other frames are hung. Hell, in the case of the Fat Lady (as I remember) pds can even move to other pds' frames. So while I can believe that those earlier paintings of Dumbledore might not be able to defend Snape's murder of himself I'm sure they (he?) could say that Snape was working for him.
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  • From callistianstar on January 12, 2009
    While it sucks that Severus can't see easily Harry's intentions with Legilimens, it sucks harder that he can't use magic. That small flashback between picking up with wand was well placed and written. It was sad that even Harry's offhand remark about Sev not shaving made Severus think Harry must be up to something, but honestly, one chapter later (with Harry asking him the one thing he shouldn't have) Harry proves that he really isn't equipped for anything about this situation at all. Marietta's short dialogue with Harry about her unfair position because of what she did with Dumbledore's Army was an interesting peice to include, and I'm glad for the Middle Name of Lily that Harry named. That was nicely done. Great job with these last two chapters.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 11, 2009
    Wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 11, 2009
    Wow I didnt expect that Marrieta would still be scorned for what she did when she was 15, damn. Harry and Severus made another improvement, I love that
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 11, 2009
    @ch. 16. What a SWEET exchange between Harry and Severus at the end. That was so touching and authentic. I hope that Severus really internalizes how significant of a thing that was for Harry to say to him. I love your Luna. She's is so IC and funny and quirky and real. Awesome job with characterization there, and Harry was acting a bit bitchy wasn't he? I guess that's IC too. lol. My heart broke when they went through all of those old wands and Sev's magic still didn't work. Poor thing. and poor Marietta, that's no fair she's still being judged for something that's been over. This is indeed an unfair world you've painted. I'm loving every minute of it. Loved Harry's response to Sev's question about punishment, he's learning to balance the tight rope that Sev needs right now, and that shows growth for both of them. Great chapter, very insightful for all of the characters.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 11, 2009
    @Ch. 15. Oh, this is so exciting. I like how you're giving us both of their POVs, it really makes this story much richer and more complex. And now we see that harry has regrets about how he treated Snape as a child, but he shouldn't be so hard on himself, he didn't know what he knows now. I don't completely agree that Ron and Harry provoked Snape's cruel comments at Hogwarts, but I understand why Snape had such a grumpy disposition under the type of stress he was under. I like how you're not making Snape's recovering or adjustment quick and easy. This is going to be a long struggle, and you're honoring it by showing how each moment presents a new challenge for someone who's survived what he has. I LOL@Harry leaning forward when Snape pointed the wand at him....he's just like..whatever, get it over with. That was awesome. And now I wonder if Snape will find out what's going on in Harry's head. That may help him a bit if he can see his intentions are good. On to the next chapter. Excellent chapter Em.
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  • From ANON - AkaneIkeda on January 11, 2009
    how sweet... want more... pleaaaaaaaaaazeeeeee
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2009
    This story is simply magnificent. I can't wait til the next cheapter. Write more soon, pleeeeeese!
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