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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From Leentjef on January 04, 2009
    this was avery very good chapter keep up the graet work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From callistianstar on January 04, 2009
    This was very cool. ^^ Draco is just too awesome in this story. I really adore him. I'm really worried about the Patronus deal, I'm not sure with a person like Diggory that it will be enough even if Harry can get him to produce one. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 04, 2009
    Why do I have a bad feeling about that Patronous Harry will ask Severus, I do hope it wont cause a serious flashback for him. I am glad though thet they are all helping each other out for the sake of Severus
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  • From ANON - A Fan on January 03, 2009
    Oh man. I really hope Harry doesn't push Severus too hard. He's still incredibly brash and headstrong like he was in his school days. I hope he will realize that some finesse will go a long way.
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  • From callistianstar on January 03, 2009
    Goodness. I had been expecting Sev to do something like that, probably while Harry was sleeping, but it was much sadder than I pictured.

    (Old habits died hard, but they did die eventually.)

    I really liked this line; I suppose none of us can really expect Snape to be back to his old self ever, all snarkiness will be touched with some sort of affection probably. I do wonder if maybe it was Draco who bought the Black property, though I'm not sure if Diggory would allow it. I'm glad for Ginny and her return and levelheadedness. It is really sad for Harry, and he shouldn't have to sacrifice this time in some (very little) respects. But for the most part, Draco was right. I don't want to think Harry didn't search hard enough, but he did use a spell that broke Sev's spirit (perhaps saved his shell) when under the circumstances Snape was tortured and forced to sexual gratify death eaters. Awesome job with these past two chapters.
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  • From ANON - leentje on January 03, 2009
    hello

    very very good cha^pter keep up with good work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - rosebud360 on January 03, 2009
    I'm enjoying your story so much. Your plot is very interesting, and I am intrigued by your use of methods of psychology. My box of tissues is almost gone. I'm buying a new box right away. In anticipation could you please update soon?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 03, 2009
    That was sad for Harry but at least a part of his life is somewhat in order
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 01, 2009
    That moment in the living room when Severus was about to fall asleep was sweet and so was what Harry said when Severus tried to give him a blow job, about him being not unattractive. The ending of this chapter was just sad, I dont know how to explain it. It just makes me sad
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  • From callistianstar on January 01, 2009
    Reviewing for the past three chapters (sorry). Very sweet ending to is latest chapter. I'm not sure if the "pawing" will be detrimental later, but it is sweet, and it is comforting to the readers to know that Snape is becoming less fearful, less tense. Draco's arrival to Harry's home had me smiling. I must say I am a bit glad for the punch to the face, though even I couldn't take Draco's advice and just let Snape die, either time. Bless Hermione and Ron. And Ginny too apparently. The three weeks with pay is awesome, and good for someone like Harry, as I doubt he will be asking Draco for money, though I hope he does. Wonderful job. Happy New Year.
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  • From AkaneIkeda on January 01, 2009
    the story is sooooooooo sweet... please go on writing...
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  • From Leentjef on January 01, 2009
    this was very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 01, 2009
    At least Severus is getting better and I am glad that Ron and Hermoine still support him
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  • From ANON - SarahAlex on January 01, 2009
    Thank you very much for this story, I can't wait to read another chapter. :o)
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  • From ANON - anon on December 31, 2008
    I absolutely adore this story... uh, although of course it's difficult to watch the measured pace of misery and doubt when one wants so much for trust and faith in saftey to be found ... and to remain. Your character descriptions and dialog are always spot on.
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