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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From Leentjef on December 30, 2008
    very very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Darkless on December 30, 2008
    How perfectly wretched is Severus. Makes one wish that they could kill the bastards that did this to him over, and over, and over again. One death is not enough to make up for all that Severus has suffered. Harry must be brave and walk carefully.
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 30, 2008
    I feel so bad for poor Snape. I really hope he shows some flash of life, or cheekiness or SOMETHING. I just wanna hug him until he doesn't feel bad anymore. Although, he'd be worried about me hugging him. *sad heart*
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 30, 2008
    @Ch. 10. This seems so damn real. The trauma that Severus went through is no joke, and you're writing the flashbacks and his current state of mind and reactions wonderfully. I think Harry's bravery and loyalty are going to be key to getting Sev to a better place. This is hard work! I love all of the little nuances to their interactions that you're writing, they speak volumes about both of them and the situation. Poor Severus! I wonder how this is going to affect Harry's situation with Ginny and I hope that he calls on Draco, Ron, and Hermione for more support. Great writing Em.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 30, 2008
    @Ch. 9....Enter Draco Malfoy. Great use of him, and very insightful dialogue. Draco seems to really understand what's going on, but I'm glad that Harry is being Harry and refuses to give up on Snape. There's always hope...always. Great chapter Em.
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  • From ANON - isadax on December 30, 2008
    Amazing work ( as usual ).
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  • From TrinityWolf on December 30, 2008
    OMG~! I LOVE THIS~! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! email me when you update? dark_flame_hiei@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 30, 2008
    Wow they are finally making some good progress, thats nice.
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 29, 2008
    Poor Snape!!!!!!! I can't wait to read Ch. 10.
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  • From Leentjef on December 29, 2008
    very very good
    keep up the good work and post
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 29, 2008
    That was such a depressing chapter. But a necessary one for Harry, I think. He needed to be woken up to the bleak realities of the slave bond spell.
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  • From Veracityrules on December 29, 2008
    Brilliant update! I love the angst and the A/R that you've created. I really like the injustice of this post-war reality. I think that the 'boy-who-lived-to-go-onto-kick-Voldemort's-butt' needs to initiate some political changes!
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  • From Bones8822 on December 29, 2008
    Very good.

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  • From Visitkarte on December 29, 2008
    @9 Let him go? No way, if anything, Severus deserves a punishment for trying to off himself. He should learn that Harry wants him alive and healthy, and afterwards he will learn that Harry wants him independent and proud.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 29, 2008
    Wow that was pretty insightful of Draco, now its up to Harry to help Severus.
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