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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Catharsis on December 28, 2008
    thanks for your story, i can't wait to read more of it !
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  • From Bones8822 on December 28, 2008
    Very good. i really like this story.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 28, 2008
    Wow that was one hell of a chapter, learned a lot about Harry there.
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  • From Leentjef on December 28, 2008
    this was very very good chapter
    keep up the graet work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 28, 2008
    I LOVE this Marietta chick....I vote to use her more in fan fic. lol. She's just what Harry and Sev needs. What a save...I knew you wouldn't kill Sevvie. So Harry blew his cash on everyone but himself. Awww, typical and DAFT. lol. Poor thing. He's so Harry, you write him well. And I love what he said about not being able to Dementor Kiss everything cruel away....Diggory sounds like George fucking Bush : ) And I like Marietta's response to Harry. Touche indeed. It's a good thing she has a soft spot for Sev or Harry would be in trouble. I wonder if he's about to find out the depth of the bond he made and what kind of impact it will have on how he interacts with Sev from now on and if he's going to go into Harry self-flagellation mode. lol. This is such an engaging read Em. Great update.
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  • From callistianstar on December 28, 2008
    While I can understand after all these years that Ginny would leave him, it is sad that she would leave him at this moment, when he's already at wits end. Thank goodness for Marietta then. Though it wasn't for Death Eaters, I suppose I should have figured Harry would spend money on everyone else. I'm rather angry at Diggory though. I could have forgiven him partially for being angry at Harry, but receiving money from Harry for his own campaign and then being nasty (and reinstituting the Dementor's Kiss) is horrible. I'm not sure whether to see Snape's suicide attempt as solely a way to escape from the pain, or if he was compelled in some manner to punish himself for causing Harry trouble (though it wasn't really trouble). Great job with these past two chapters. I look forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 27, 2008
    Amazing story. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 27, 2008
    Well that seperation was a long time coming. Ah I just hope Harry will wake up to save him
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 27, 2008
    AHHHHH!!!! Nuuuu! Snape cannot die! I love him too much! Please tell me Harry saves him??? (Of course Harry saves him!) Damn it, you're just way too good at writing--you suck me into your story plots, and I find myself checking your page twice a day in hopes of an update. (Of course, I realize that you can't update that much--you're not superhuman. Thank you for writing! :D
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 27, 2008
    OMFG!! Emily!! Severus cannot kill himself. NO! OMFG>....I mean, this is totally understandable but the joy and desire that seems to stamp out any sense of fear or regret is just truly frightening. Damn, the jugular? wow.

    Harry does seem a bit irresponsible and for the first time in a Snarry I don't hate Ginny, I understand where she's coming from. But Harry has to do what he has to do and I guess she does too. I kinda feel bad for Harry, the whole Aunt Petunia emotional abuse thing coming back and taunting him. I can so see him going there. And wow@ Severus like not being able to be comfortable around someone who means him well. He's totally fucked up and I'm very worried about whether he can ever get better, that is if he lives which I know he will because this is a f*cking Snarry! Right? AWESOME update...can't wait to see how he's going to come out of this!

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  • From Narcoleptic86 on December 26, 2008
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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  • From jddammann on December 25, 2008
    Extremely good and had me on the edge of my seat! I hope Harry reads the books soon and begins to get an idea of what Severus has been through and realizes that the "normal" things he says to Severus don't seem normal to Severus. I'm looking forward to the next update! :-)
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 24, 2008
    Damn Diggory is really going to make this difficult for them. I am not looking forward to Ginny getting to met Severus, I just hope thier daughter will be kind to Severus.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 23, 2008
    Wow, what a chapter...first we find out what Sev has been through..HELL! WTF? They skinned his hand? that was horrific to read about...poor thing...and to find out that he's so confused about Harry, who is supposed to be his Master but doesn't really yet fully grasp the gravity of the spell he cast and how it affects Sev. I LOVE Marietta here, and I'd NEVER thought I say that about her..but Sev really needs someone who is going to be protective of him like this, and I'm glad she's giving it to Harry cold and hard. I hope Harry follows her orders and reads everything he can about survivors of torture and sexual abuse. He really doesn't need to bring the Ginny drama around Sev at a time like this. You've really thought this out, it's evident, and I'm really on the edge of my seat to see how Sev is going to progress from here as well as how it's going to affect Harry. As always, love the way you involve Ron and Hermione, and damn, who would have thought Harry would be near broke with all his money. That was really well done and frankly quite plausible considering how much he likes to help others. Great update Em!
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  • From Leentjef on December 23, 2008
    this is very vey good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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