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By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - isadax on December 23, 2008
    That's great ! Update soon please.
    and I love Marietta.
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 23, 2008
    I feel so bad for Snape. He's been completely broken. He doesn't even understand that Harry=Safe. Poor guy. I just wanna give him a giant hug and a really big cookie.
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  • From callistianstar on December 23, 2008
    Damn. Harry is totally out of his element in every way, so I really look forward to how you develop this. And poor Severus. I really hope to have some of his own personality back soon, it is really disheartening to read of a Snape like this. It might be worse (but helpful) to read Sev's point of view, or his expressions of confusion when Harry tries to tell him he isn't property.

    A big "grr" to Diggory, although is he just against Harry, or against the idea of helping death eaters in general? I thought it was clever to make Sirius pay (as well as that comment about him having no grave). Despite the fact that they hated each other, it is rather fitting for a man accussed of wrongdoing that he didn't commit to save another innocent, legally guilty, party. I'm not sure it is important really, but I'm really curious how Harry managed to squander the fortune. Did he spend it all searching for old death eaters and such? I look forward to the next chapter. It will be hard to see a Harry who isn't sensitive enough to understand the situation, but is all too sympathetic and easily feels guilty. I wonder did Sev only accept slavery for a split second before death, but with the complete belief that Harry would die, so it would all be moot?
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  • From callistianstar on December 22, 2008
    I'm glad for the explanations, but that was much crazier than I imagined. I am glad that Sev was conscious to recognize the spell and submit, even if he wasn't entirely of the right mind. It is ironic that it is Marietta willing to defy the rules and try and take care of a former death eater, and even be suspicious of Harry. Although with all of this new information I am a bit scared at how Sev's attitude and personality will be like, I really am enjoying this story so far.
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  • From LadyLaran on December 21, 2008
    Wow..that's an awesome hooking chapter!
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  • From Leentjef on December 21, 2008
    very very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Bones on December 21, 2008
    Very very good.
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  • From Darkless on December 21, 2008
    Wow. A unique plot and intense situations. I'm liking it a lot. And while smexx is yummy, I'd go for good long story and tons of angst anytime. Have at it and take me with you! Please continue.
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  • From jddammann on December 21, 2008
    Dumb kid, but then again he is going to be dumb about many things in the future. Why he doesn't feel attracted to Ginny like he should, why he has always been drawn to Severus as he has. Gee, I wonder what that all means. :-)

    I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 21, 2008
    AWWWWWW *fangirl* I love your writing. That's all there is to it. It's incredible, and I always fall so in love with your storylines. Please, oh please oh please oh please update soon. You have my undying loyalty.
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  • From jddammann on December 20, 2008
    Oh crap, Harry bound Severus to him with the spell? I hope the legal problems don't last too long, they shouldn't considering Harry had access to Severus' records, etc. Can't wait till the next chapter! :-)
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  • From Leentjef on December 20, 2008
    very very good keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - reighchama on December 20, 2008
    wow. Harry really does not know the extent of the spell he did does he? or am i going way off track with my assumptions here?

    i am excited for the next chapter(s)!!!!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 20, 2008
    Damn I do hope the Minister will listen to Harry cause I got a feeling hell will break lose if Harry doesnt get his way. I cant wait to see when Harry discovers that he has a slave bond over Severus and everyone else's reactions
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2008
    This is a really good story, lol, seemed a bit short though but that was probably more because I'd gotten really into it and just wanted to read more. Love how you kept everyone in character though keeping a really unique plot and spin on things, a lot of fanfictions you read Snape would have broken down by now but he's still a lot like his usual self which is good. Look forward to more!
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