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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 20, 2008
    Damn! They really fucked Sev over didn't they? I like Marietta, I'm glad that Sev has an advocate...damn that Auror whoever he is...I can't believe Sev is being treated AND being restrained. That's some cold shit. I'm glad Harry is standing by him, but Sev's reactions to Harry are curious. I guess he's been longing for his touch? hmm. This is gonna be complicated. It doesn't seem like Harry even has the foggiest clue about what he's done, nor does Sev? I'm very interested to see what happens next.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 20, 2008
    @Ch. 3. OMG! What a gripping chapter!! First, Harry's dreams of Snape were like...wow...that was just crazy, and for some reason I knew it had some truth to it, after all they're bonded right? Harry/Ginny are interesting here, Ginny seems reasonable, and Harry seems sorta aloof. Poor thing. I like how Ron basically told him he looks like shit. lol. I love the set up, the politics, underground cells of DE's and terrorist attacks continuing long after the war is over. And wow@at the end there, Snape's discovery. What the hell has he been through. It's been much too long and I'm so very worried about his mental state. How much torture and imprisonment can one deal with at the hands of DEs? ::shudder:::I can't wait to see how Harry's bond figures into this because if I were Snape I'd be mad as hell at Harry...grateful and mad, but mostly mad. lol.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 20, 2008
    @Ch. 2. That was so somber...the thought of Sev being dead and passing his things onto Harry is so bittersweet really....obviously he can't be..it's a Snarry! lol. but the reactions portrayed in this chapter were really IC and carried a lot of weight. I love, as always how you keep the Trio in tact, and how Hermione's clever mind is constantly working...why Harry lying? lol
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 20, 2008
    @Ch. 1. Fantastic retelling of one of the most gripping scenes in the HP series. I love the twist you gave it. Poor Sev...I hope Harry comes back to him soon. Always using curses and spells without researching them lol, but that's why we love the boy.
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  • From ANON - AI on December 20, 2008
    more, more.... pleaze... sevvieeeee... O_Q
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  • From ANON - AI on December 19, 2008
    More, more more! Hell, that
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  • From callistianstar on December 19, 2008
    Goodness. I really wasn't expecting that time skip to occur so soon since you created that first chapter. You've done an excellent job setting up this newest scene for us. In the purest sense Harry just seems incomplete, unable to join Ginny. I found how you described his weird sense that the war would never be over amazing. It is sad that the world, with these terrorist attacks have still not let Harry alone, still expecting him to save the day.

    And Snape. I hadn't considered it before, but I suppose it is possible he died for just a moment. I can't imagine the guilt that will not override Harry for leaving him defenseless in the Shack. I wonder if you'll go into an area of thought where Snape acts bitterly over the fact that Harry saved him. That last scene was crazy tense. I look forward to where you take this from here. I hope they found a way to redeem Snape even without the pensieve.
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on December 19, 2008
    omgosh
    i got sooo teary at the ending of chapter 3!!
    your are dreadful...
    dreadfully fantastic =]
    you better give him plenty of loving after this! lol =]
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  • From jddammann on December 18, 2008
    Absolutely wonderful so far, I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to find out what happened in the shack, what the spell, was, who took Severus, and what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - Bones on December 18, 2008
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 18, 2008
    Still totally loving this story.
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  • From ANON - Aufie on December 18, 2008
    As well written as all your pieces, I cannot wait to read more. I hope this one is going to be as insightful and fulfilling as Ashes, though I can understand if it is not just as long! Beautiful work as always, I'll be watching closely for more chapters.

    P.S You appear to share my vague dislike of Ginny, I wonder where that comes from?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 18, 2008
    Ok my reaction after reading chapter 3 was "Ok wow"
    Seven years is a very long time and now they finally find Severus. And his reaction to Harry was peculiar, I cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Alesia on December 18, 2008
    holy effing shit! That's creepy as hell! Thank goodness Harry found Snape! I can't even imagine what that poor man has been through! My skin is practically humming with anticipation! I am so excited for the next chapter!
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  • From Leentjef on December 18, 2008
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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