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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From mpregfan69 on December 18, 2008
    awesome story please contiuen with it. ( sorry my spelling is bad)
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  • From callistianstar on December 18, 2008
    I'm not sure if this is proof enought to believe the truth, but I'm certain Snape wouldn't have normally have written Harry as the person who would receive his possessions upon his death. I mean, you didn't change that aspect in the last chapter. Snape completely believed Harry was going to die (not having any idea that he might come back). I'm guessing he's trying to recover, giving that note to Harry was a way of dispensing the secret to Harry and allowing him time to heal so no one hunts him. OR he had always had Harry on his will, even though he knew Harry would die, and did it as a way of further proof that Snape was always a spy. Although that last guess isn't something I'm really backing since it would seem to coldly caculating even for him (since he was distressed that he was sending Harry to his doom).

    The fact that Harry didn't tell Hermione the spell is frustrating since I do really want to know what it does. I like that you had even Ron in tears over Snape's death. That is, believe it or not, the first time I can remember someone doing that. Most stories have him awkwardly and mostly still disliking Snape off to the side (Which is still a possibility with Ron's personality). Great frustrating chapter. lol I look forward to more.
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  • From Seph7 on December 17, 2008
    I can't wait for more! It's nice to see that there might have been a different reason behind those 'look at me' words...
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 17, 2008
    Why do I get the feeling that the spell Harry used was a slave spell and the reason for the transfer of belogings is because Harry now owns Severus. I cant wait for Severus to show himself again
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  • From Elphaba on December 16, 2008
    Interesting! Very Very Interesting!
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  • From ANON - Immersion on December 16, 2008
    Please do continue! I can tell I'm going to like your style already =)
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  • From Leentjef on December 16, 2008
    very very good beginning keep up the good work
    and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Lionessmon on December 16, 2008
    I really like this idea and it's great to know there is a new fic to get my teeth into when Ashes of Armageddon finishes. Post soon.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 16, 2008
    Oh love how you chaged and added things to that scene. I wonder what that spell does anyway. Cant wait for more
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  • From callistianstar on December 16, 2008
    I like the twist here as it could make sense that this is something he was looking for in Harry's eyes, not anything so entirely romantic as he "thought of Lily" in the books [as is implied], but something far simpler but less understanable. I'm really curious as to exactly what that spell does and how it works. Had Harry not come back, as we know he will, what would have happened to Severus? It is cool that it is probably another spell for Severus' potions book. ^^ Interesting so far. I love that warning. lol *protects Draco*
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  • From SeverusBabyMomma on December 16, 2008
    love it so far cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From jddammann on December 15, 2008
    Heavy angst isn't my thing, some angst for the story-line is good as long as it leads to a resolution. I would never want Ginny killed off, but in a Snarry, she has to go somewhere and at this point she and Harry are not together, so... Hurt and heal is good, but hurt and heal with attraction and sex are better! :-)

    What ever you decide to do of course I'll read it, I just may stop at some point with no ill will and of course nothing against your writing skills, I love them!
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