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Reviews for Proof of Life

By : emilywaters
  • From alientheet on September 25, 2010
    Wow! Just started reading this story, up to chapter 22 now & loving it. I'm generally not a fan of slave fics but love how you're staying true to the main characters & developing minor characters from the original story in your own way!
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  • From alina290 on September 22, 2010
    Poor Snape and Harry too. It was nice of Ginny to take Lili to see them.
    Liz
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  • From mrequecky on September 21, 2010
    Loved :D
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  • From ANON - leanne on September 20, 2010
    Minister Diggory NEEDS TO GO DOWN!!!! He's becoming a very evil person and should be taken out of the ministery Harry could have used his power as Hero Against Voldmort to end Diggory's career, he shouldn't have made himself get fired. That's not how you use your power. Diggory is becoming corrupt and far to controlling the people live in a kind of fear against speaking out and doing anything that might be concived as against Diggory and his new policies. It's terrible, Potter and his people need to start a movement to have that Idiot taken out of office. When is that going to happen? As far as I can see Diggory might Blame Severus for his son's death because Severus was a Professor and should have somehow prevented Cedric's death. I mean why else is he so set agains't Severus and the clearing of severus's name??

    Good story, well done on some of the showing of the symptoms of what happens to raped and tortured victims. It's well done..
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  • From Fleetzz90 on September 19, 2010
    Couldn't stop reading today and disappointed it is incomplete, glad you didn't make Ginny evil. Hope you continue.

    Also new to aft and wish I could me notified when this is updated.
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 19, 2010
    gah I'm so curious about why he keeps getting sick! Is the ministry trying to become the new hierarchy and take control that way? are they testing it out on Snape first? gah ! I wanna know!
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  • From ANON - Tariray on September 15, 2010
    I love this fic - love it....

    really i am blown away by your talent - i started reading this lasy year and i am still drawn to it.

    Well done!!!

    I would love to mention you in my little blog - it isnt much but i just thought i should let you know.

    THank you for your writing,
    T
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  • From QueenB on September 14, 2010
    Ch. 48 What a harrowing chapter. Harry is going to be terrified when he finds Severus unconscious. I wonder how long it will take for him to find out what
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 13, 2010
    I'm really enjoying watching Harry and Severus grow together. And how worried they are for each other and that Harry is still cognizant of the spell and it's potential effect on Sev's emotions. I hope they find a way to release him from it so it's never a concern. I love that line about perhaps it was better things were violent, so it didn't taint the gentle tenderness that Harry's showing him. Great update, Em.
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  • From ANON - Minue on September 13, 2010
    Somehow I have the feeling that Draco will die in this story. Nobody will miss him if he is captured, since he wanted to leave the country... More suspense regarding Severus - I hopy he will be allright! I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - alina290 on September 13, 2010
    Well this chapter certainly brings more out about the slave bond. More questions than answers. I look forward tot he next chapte. Thank you for this one.
    Liz
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  • From AlphazSlut on September 12, 2010
    I have no I idea what in the world just happened to our Sevvie.... :( When he wakes up will he remember again?? Has he been freed from the slave bond or something?? AGGGGHHHHH! THE SUSPENSE!!! Update quickly pleeease!!
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  • From mrequecky on September 12, 2010
    Oh wow, I wonder if that memory loss is more permanent?
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 09, 2010
    Oh wow. It's been such a long time since I've seen this story. I'm glad your sticking with it.
    Harry and Severus are together (for now at least). But Draco leaving the country was completely unexpected.
    Great chapter!
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  • From QueenB on September 08, 2010
    Ch. 47 It's wonderful the way you've portrayed them here. Harry and his friends comported themselves well, far better than that inbred Malfoy. I truly expected an ugly and dangerous fight to break out but they all managed to avert disaster.

    I imagine that Severus spent a lot of time thinking after Draco left; the boy's assertions are the very thing that would be preying on his mind. In fact, Harry will have to think about letting Severus find his own way and his own life. It's the only way to ensure that Severus is his own man rather than a pampered pet. Perhaps he will want to do what Draco did--move to another country. In that case, what would Harry do?


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