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By : emilywaters

From pirategrrl on January 23, 2010
Too good not to finish. Please do.
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From ANON - liza on November 18, 2009
I apologize for not signing in but I'm just too tired to care :) I really love this chapter. What am I saying? I love all of your chapters. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. I love the dinamics between all the characters. You've breathed life into everyone. And you've made use of characters that have always been there just waiting for a storyline, instead of throwing in a bunch of OCs. Not that there's anything wrong with original characters, but you get my meaning. I mean, Marietta is so fantastic and I love that you've brought her to life.

I love the developing relationships between everyone and the fact that even now, years later, they're still learning stuff about one another. The moment between Harry and Severus on the hill was beuatiful. Then again, all their moments are amazing. I find their developing relationship mezmerizing in it's progression.

There's just the right amount of angst in this to make it enjoyable. I mean, there's an obstacle to be defeated and it's difficult with no obvious solution but it doesn't feel hopeless. I mean, they're working for their happy ending but at least I feel they could actually reach it in the end. Does that make sense? If not, my apologies, it's 3am and I'm exhausted. But I know reviews are food to the writer's soul so I wanted to feed you for such a good job :)
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From Jags on November 13, 2009
that was very excellent! please write me when you get more lonewolfjags@gmail.com
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From mrequecky on November 08, 2009
Oh, I loved the joke at the end >D Go Marietta and Severus for brewing !
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From QueenB on November 07, 2009
Ch. 42 Ooh, it seems that Severus can play well with others, after all. They just have to be geniuses. I like Harry
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From ANON - TempermentalBaker on November 07, 2009
Loved Ch. 42! I felt like I was waiting forever--but it was worth it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From callistianstar on November 06, 2009
Really nice job with this latest chapter. ^^ I loved Harry's quote at the end of this. And Severus' reaction to seeing Harry and Marietta was kind of adorable and sad, but I like how you resolved that even if Severus still couldn't voice to Harry that it did mean something more than what Harry concluded. Lovely job so far.
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From ANON - Iralima on November 06, 2009
Thank you! I've been checking for updates every day since ch 41 was released. I was so worried Severus was going to be caught either by the Ministry or Death Eaters (though those seem to be pretty much one and the same at this point). I love it that Severus is getting some of his old snarkiness back, but in a more friendly way. Although I wish harry hadn't dropped the whole "did you really mean the hitting on me thing" subject so easily, I suppose that'll come up again later? Very much looking forward to Severus's personality coming back/developing more in the coming chapters.
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From ANON - anon on November 06, 2009
Another great chapter. I'm so relieved that what followed last chapter was almost anticlimactic - a lot like real life where perspectives the day after a fight or huge disappointment are often muted and able to be approached. The fact that Snape can is progress. I like this Harry - I don't think of him as weak but considering and capable of taking one day a time. And there's nothing like a project to improve the mood. Clever to make a joint project with Marietta.
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From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2009
I am fully enjoying this story, and I hope you will update soon! You're an evil cliff-hangery-type person, keeping us on the edge of our seats and wondering what will happen next.
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From ANON - LESLEY on October 29, 2009
Sorry that I have not reviewed before. Just want to say your story is amazing. I Love it so much, especially the last chapter, it is both so sad and so hot at the same time.
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From ANON - leenf on October 22, 2009
very very good post
keep up the graet work and post soon
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From ANON - TempermentalBaker on October 20, 2009
I'll admit, I stopped checking in on your story for a while. It seemed to take too long-- But I thought about it again last night, and I started reading it again. 10 chapters later, I was at chapter 41, screaming at my computer screen, "No!!!!!!! I should have waited longer!!!!!" Now I anxiously await another fantastic chapter. I thank you for your terrific writing skills, and that rare talent to captivate your audience.
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From ANON - violetfly on October 18, 2009
I just came across this story last night and finished what there is so far just now. I love it! I was hooked from the start. You have a great character development and not just a story filled w/ plot twists just for fun. I love where it's going, keep it up b/c i can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - lettuce on October 18, 2009
love this story, please update soon
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