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By : LadyBlueEyes

From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2009
Yay! Yay! Yay! You updated. I've been desperately wondering what happened to Hermione and hoping that Draco would get there in time which he kind of did but not before the potion was set to work, obviously. I think Draco better keep a close eye on Theo and Goyle as well for his own sake. And how typical of Hermione and perhaps women in general to sacrafice themselves and their wellbeing before they'd dare to be a burden on anyone else. Not once did Hermione think of herself save for not wanting the whole school to know what almost happened but in a way, I don't think it had anything to do with shame. Hermione would have been thinking ahead even after what happened to her, I'm sure of it. And how very interesting that Hermione has her own seperate quarters for Draco to escort her too while they plan for the effects of the potion. Oh I can hardly wait to see what happens there. *evil grin*.

I have no problem with Harry and Luna beiung together - that's what fan fics are for, trying different pairings and situation on for size, it just adds to the fun. :) And as for real life - I hear you, my dear, I hear you! Huggles!!!
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From margaritama on March 04, 2009
I was shaking just shaking at the top...Theo is vicious. Draco then swoops in for the rescue. I love how strong he is despite his situation and fear...he seems to be able to rise above it and think clearly, taking control of a situation.

Don't think I agree with Hermione's actions though. She needs a doctor or at least go to see Snape.
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From memismin on January 30, 2009
I like it. The whole story is very intense, I hope you continue on soon!
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From HarryGinny4eva on January 29, 2009
Um, no. That's not what happened. She almost drank it, but she didn't. It, uh...disappeared before she could swallow it. And, they're NOT going to rape her. No, she's going to get saved, yes, that's it. And, they are going to be hurt BADLY for what they TRIED BUT DIDN'T SUCCEED in doing to her. ARGH!!!!

Okay, back to sanity. Sigh. Your writing it terrific and the story is simply captivating. I can't say I like all of your characters (damn Nott and Goyle to the pits of Hell! grumble grumble grumble), but I love your characterizations. I look forward to seeing you somehow get her out of this mess, now that all seems completely lost. :-(

Can you tell I am enjoying it? lol Seriously, thank you. This is really good.
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From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2009
I think I'm enjoying the song choices as much as the story. I haven't heard of this one, what interesting lyrics.

Ah so Ginny and Neville were chosen for the debriefing. Does Harry know Blaise had a bit of a thing for Ginny even though he 'said' he would never act on it? LOL And Neville suffered a lot at the hands of Draco and his goons too. What was Harry thinking besides the fact that they seemed the most accepting? They all seem to be getting along very well. At least they were until Ron and Michael butted in. They're just not ready to let go and move on, are they? I hope they know what they're letting themselves in for. And Michael's reason for joing the group is just ridiculous, I'm glad it fell back in his face. I suppose it's nice that he wanted to get closer to Ginny but it obviously wasn't for the right reasons. And what business is it of anyone else's who Blaise's mother slept with or how many, she's an adult, she doesn't have to answer to them in that way.

OMG I so didn't see the whole Luna/Harry thing coming. What a cool twist. :) Totally unexpected! I might be a H/G fan but I am not opposed to reading something different especially when it's going to be so unusual. LOL You just know there's something more to Luna than JKR ever let on.

Uhoh, I didn't think they'd catch Hermione so easily and I bet she's not very impressed with herself either. Funny how she still thought of others first before herself, I like that about her. Love, love LOVE Goyle's comment about her wiggling her arse while trying to get away - I was practically standing there watching him say it. Perhaps I should rescue her? But that would spoil the fun of who I imagine will come to her rescue instead. One or both Slytherins maybe???? Now I have to bloody wait and find out, don't I? Bah!!! And what the heck is that potion going to do to her?????
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From margaritama on January 29, 2009
WOW - what a fantastic chapter. Theo is a sadistic bastard - I'm sure he gave Hermione some type of poison....I wonder how she is crucial to the war? Very very interesting. I don't see how Draco/Hermione will come together and I love that - it makes the story so much more interesting when we don't see something coming.

I hope someone comes by to save her - maybe this is a Draco/Blaise help her set up? OOOO - please post soon.

I love the thought of Harry and Luna - I always felt they had a connection, Ginny felt forced.
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From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2009
Interesting song choice! ;) And how appropriate. LOL I don't imagine Nott really knows what he's doing, he doesn't understand the full implications of what he has been asked to do but I am sure he will. I like that you did not make him ugly. The Dark Side does have its own attractions and it is not until that deception is revealled do we understand the ugliness trembling just below the surface.

Oh and there's plenty of Nott to gon around, is there? He doesn't realise what a scorned woman can do either then? I almost feel sorry for him. LOL Sounds like quite the party going on at Goyles too. LOL Very interesting. Oh and Goyle's got it going on now too, one surprise after the other, hey?

Hot damn woman - did I miss the 'hot stuff here' warning? LOL Suddenly I feel like I'm missing out not being at this party. LMAO *cough* That was......delish! Feel free to write more of that stuff. haha!!
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From HarryGinny4eva on January 13, 2009
I have a few choice words for your Nott and Goyle, but I am going to refrain from cursing. lol Golly day! What assholes!!!!! Oops, sorry. But, they are! And, now you have praying for another update REALLY SOON, so that we can see that he fails and gets punished SEVERELY! But, alas, as you are only at the beginning of the story, I dont believe I will get my wish. lol Well, update soon anyway, please, because I need to know what happens next! Thanks! G4eva
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From margaritama on January 13, 2009
I like this story - very complex and rich. Like Theo taking a central role.

I have a feeling there is a bit of a set up in Chapter 4 that might lead to more Draco/Hermione interaction. Hopefully Theo won't get his way and Hermione will be rescued before anything unpleasant can happen or before he can make her swallow this poison. It'll be interesting to see how she is crucial to the war and why Voldemort wants her out of the way.
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From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2009
Wow, Blaise has a sister, what an interesting twist. It sounds like Blaise is doing this for someone else but Draco is doing it for himself - well as it appears so far but I really do have to wonder if that's the only reason. ;) Or is there another reason that he doesn't know of yet. LOL Now who exactly are those who don't trust the delicious duo? After all, they all agreed on the truth serum approach.......

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From HarryGinny4eva on December 29, 2008
Much like the group in the room, I was interested in Blaise's answers, but really wanted to hear Draco's. Job very well done! I look forward to seeing this group get to know one another and learn to work together. I have a feeling Ron isn't going to make it easy. Thanks! HG4eva
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From bananasforyou on December 23, 2008
yes! cant wait
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From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2008
Ah Ron, of course he would be suspicious but I suppose someone has to match Draco for melodrama. LOL I wondered what would have to be done to convince the DA of Blaise' and Draco's sincerity - I didn't think of the truth serum. Love that Hermione took it upon herself to approach the boys and ask what they thought of the conditions of entry into Harry's world, so to speak. I was waiting for Draco to go spare but it would appear that Blaise is a rather maturing influence on him. Still he could only keep things reigned in for so long. LOL I wonder if they realised how thoughtful Hermione was being by telling them of the rumours she'd heard? And uh oh, what exactly is one Theodore Nott up to?????

I'm so glad you decided not to hold on to this but started posting istead. Yay!!! And I LOVE stories where we get to see their inner thoughts and why they react the way the do. Double yay!! Believe me, I enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. :)
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From HarryGinny4eva on December 22, 2008
Hey LBE. Yeah, I get to repay all your kind words to me and give you reviews. I say yeah, because I am already enjoying this story a lot. I like the premise and the tenseness of the beginning. I have a picture in my head of your Draco and Blaise, and even your Nott (evil git!) and their pain and angst and I love it. Hermione being the one to tell them about the truth serum was nicely done. It made sense in her character and was an excellent way for her to start to see the new Draco. I look forward to loads more soon. Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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From LadyVoldemort87 on December 20, 2008
This is such an exciting start to the fic!I love Blaise and of course, my Draco :P (Hes no Edward but whatever...LOL)

I honestly didn't expect you to post this so soon! Why the hell didn't you tell me Lady? Ahh, well, nevermind. It looks to be a very promising fic and I am really excited for the rest. I just hope you will finish it, while your buzz is so strong! I know having read the chapters to come, there are so suprises in store!

Looking forward to getting stuck into it!

Love and snuggles, and Christmas cuddles!

~LadyVoldemort87~
xoxoxoxoxo
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