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Reviews for Inter Vivos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From bgreenwivy on February 28, 2009
    Alright I finally took a break from devouring your story to review and let me tell you. My interest has not waned even for a second. I am truly hooked and it is only the fact that this is a break between this book and the next. I have to tell you how much I appreciate your take on things and it makes me wish that you could publish an alternate Harry Potter collection to commemorate this story. I guess in your own way you are though...The characterization is brilliant and the complexity of the characters is at once spot on but also wonderfully developed in the what ifs.
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  • From SageKiller on February 28, 2009
    This story is really good, I love how you manage to include most of the events of the books and still keep it really original. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Mangacat on February 28, 2009
    Very poetic last scene.. I like where this is going, taking turns that are so different from the original, but so perfectly fit into the same outcome if you will. I 've have that lately, the observation that you can give one and the same plot to two different persons and what comes out will actually be atwo totally different worlds. I think that's awesome. And now I'm going on holiday, but I expect some chapters to welcome me back!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - minn yun on February 28, 2009
    severus can really take charge when he needs to. even dumbledore yielded to his assertiveness then. when severus said that harry needs a place where he can eat whatever, and how much that he wants to, i can't help but to cry. a lot. wishing harry a healful summer. thank you!
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  • From Mangacat on February 28, 2009
    Oh hell.. that was, pheewwwww!!! DAmnit!!
    Cat
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  • From Mangacat on February 28, 2009
    Oh wow, that boy REALLY is a piece of work!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on February 28, 2009
    Outstanding job! I love the imagery you created of Harry stepping forward with arms open wide to embrace his future. Please update once more when you have the time.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 26, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 20!!!
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  • From Tesgura on February 26, 2009
    Amazing story, love the plot, love the application, can't wait for more to see where you're going with this. I especially loved the feigned death spell Draco used, great idea. I hope Narcissa will be able to help Draco against Lucius so that he and Harry can be happy together, at least defeat the Dark Lord for good.
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  • From ANON - minn yun on February 26, 2009
    and a "Dehisco" in "Expelliarmus" stead, i really appreciate that. we can't let all our heroes disarm the villains all the same way, right? that's sooo boring.
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  • From ANON - min yun on February 26, 2009
    he-they moments are the best! i haven't read anything like that, after all my reading HP fanfics here, there and somewhere (a lurker in many, many HP lounges). thank you! and harry linking draco's voice as a beloved? just so sweet the cavity is getting bigger. but i'm smiling through it, so thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on February 25, 2009
    I must say, I really like how you wrote this chapter in particular, the confrontation btwn the Dark Lord and Snape in particular along w/ both of their interactions with Harry.Excellent job.
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  • From serenagold on February 25, 2009
    Oh my god!! !!O_O!!

    That was unbelieveably intense!! Harry's possession then Voldemorte's and finally the internal mind battle?? Holy crap!! This chapter was insanity personified.

    I wonder whats going to happen now! I mean obviously Draco can no longer return home. Snape's no longer a spy. Black's gotta (at least somewhat) stop his hatred of Snape for saving his nephew. And no matter what Dumbledore says, there is no way Snape or Black (because, to support the cause you know he's going to be informed of the truth) is going to let Harry go back to the Dursleys. This chapter changes EVERYTHING that could happen in terms of the direction of the story.

    Keep up the fantastic work.
    I'm looking forward to it. ^^
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on February 25, 2009
    ooohhh what ever can snape mean? mmm...poor black lol...im guessing draco didnt know any healing spells?
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  • From ANON - ceas on February 24, 2009
    i have just one word for you: awesome
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