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Reviews for Inter Vivos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From serenagold on February 01, 2009
    Holy crap!! ''O_O'' Draco got played!! Lucius totally used him! (Once Harry gets back and school is over, Draco is so dead when it comes time for him to go home. Yikes@!)

    Although, if the canon is any indication, none of the death eaters other than Petigrew and Crouch/Moody knew about the plans for Voldemort's return. Obvious it seems like Lucius is working in conjunction with Crouch/Moody. What could this mean?? I suppose Voldemort could be wanting to restore his body as soon as possible, but on the other hand, he's always struck me as a person with a flair for the dramatic. Harry disappearing in front of countless witnesses makes for a great panic filled stage for his triumphant return. Had the plan worked as he intended in the original book, the impact of his return would have sent tremors throughout the wizarding world with no chance for denial or cover up. By Harry escaping, it seems like the better plan for them to bide their time and wait. Hmm.. I wonder what changes this will mean now that Harry is snatched up early??)


    Total freaking craziness!!!!! What will they do??? Ron's so going to blame Draco over this, but hopefully after seeing Draco's reaction to Harry's disappearance they will be able to put aside their differences and hurry to Dumbledore to alert him to who's gone! Gah! Such a cliff hanger!!! I hope you don't take too long to update. I'm going to be thinking about his for the rest of the week! >_
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  • From callistianstar on February 01, 2009
    I'm horrified. I'm completely and utterly horrified. YOU! I adore you. I really do. But this was such a emotion-packed chapter. ARG! I was so surprised and happy with the Second task. That Draco was Harry's most precious person...I completely grinned with absolute delight. The ironic situation between Severus and Harry had me smiling fondly, since those two both have a problem with Severus being called "sir" and Harry being called "Potter" with Draco being the ultimate object for comparison. But then this! Lucius. I want to wring my hand around his fictional neck. Poor Draco really. I hope Harry is alright obviously, but when Harry returns, although I assume Harry will understand that Draco wouldn't ever betray him, I hope that Draco doesn't take this situation to mean that he should definitely just give in to helplessness and follow the Dark Lord. Honestly. Though Draco is only 14, I really hope he goes to Harry somehow and helps him get out of, whereever Harry's been portkeyed to. Fabulous, but nerve-racking chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 01, 2009
    Holy crap! That ending gave me a shiver. In hindsight, of course Draco wouldn't be able to fool his father, Voldemort's right hand man. Draco was so eager to please Harry that he wasn't suspicious of Moody (though Draco had no way on knowing that Moody was an impostor).
    That was an awesome chapter. I cannot wait for the next one!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - DBZvelena on February 01, 2009
    ow no, Harry!!!!!
    Pore Draco, but I'm sure Harry will figure it out.

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  • From jeslynnighthawk on February 01, 2009
    I just thought I should let you know that I'd been DYING for a good AU for a while now, and this one is fantastic. I eagerly await the coming chapters. :D
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  • From ANON - heyyou on January 31, 2009
    OMG! You're an evil genius. Evil because that ending was terrifying and a genius because who the hell has the brains to come up with a twist like that.
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  • From Toddy on January 31, 2009
    I like the way you weave your story in and out of the book's story. I aamire your invention too, especially getting inside Snape's head. Wainting for the next installment.
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  • From serenagold on January 30, 2009
    Snape fall so easily into bad habits and doesn't even realize he's doing it. Such ego as he has the balls to criticize Draco about stuff.

    Also, I loved how Harry snuck out to see Draco. ^^
    I don't know what Draco expects, but even if Harry doesn't ask Cho out, he's still going to be extremely jealous about anyone he does bring with him. ;)

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Mangacat on January 29, 2009
    great new chapter, the way Draco gets to take the credit for the dragons and the way he plays Severus like a fiddle, it's adorable!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - LarienMiriel on January 29, 2009
    I love your story! can't wait for the next chaper!
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  • From Ecks on January 29, 2009
    I can't wait to see what Harry says in response! great Chapter!
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  • From callistianstar on January 29, 2009
    Draco is such a sweetie. ^^ I like that there is more strength and sarcasm and happiness in his speech and actions now. I'm not entirely sure how Harry will take Draco's request, but I never thought much of Harry's crush on Cho, really. Snape's sections were interesting, and I particular liked the line where he acknowledged how he took Harry's mother from Harry. Not just Lily, but Harry's mother. I'm really enjoying how you flesh out both of these relationships with Harry. Great chapter.
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  • From serenagold on January 26, 2009
    bwahahahahaha... ^^

    I love how Draco manages to find a silver lining with Harry's misfortune. lol
    Great chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 11!!! Will Severus help Harry?
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  • From Mangacat on January 25, 2009
    Oh I love love love IT... It's soooo great, Snape's insights on Harry's learning curve just about much else, Draco's first apparition of a crush, Harry's obliviousness to just about everything in his wake (that guy is REALLY self-absorbed like that, I notice only just now!!) And over all, yeah, it's great!!
    Cat
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