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Reviews for Inter Vivos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on July 11, 2009
    I just got to chapter 12 and all I can say is; oh SHIT.
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  • From alwaysabrat on June 26, 2009
    This was an awsome story!! i LOVED it! :D thank you for sharing it. the character development was well done and nothing seemed rushed. (they developed in ways that most people would giving their personalities which makes this story balivible)well done agian!! :D
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  • From ANON - C and D on June 14, 2009
    You so effing amazing its hard to believe! Your stories are always so awesome and long and you update so quickly! As far as a hogwarts AU I really loved this story alot its one of my top favorites, it was a much better quality and had none of that 'oh now Harry is a total slytherin convert and hates all the Griffindors' that alot of other fanfics tend to lean towards. I also like your characterization of Ron so he wasn't the narrow minded jerk that many HD shippers like to write him being, they like to hold fourth year against him or say he's dumb because it took him so long to date Hermione. But I have to say thing I appreciate the most and have found the most disturbing in the fandom is Harry and Draco didn't begin a sexual relationship too early. Nothing more disturbing than the thought of Hogwarts having 12 yr olds screwing in broom closets.
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  • From serenagold on June 12, 2009
    Excellent story!! Congratulations on finishing! It was a hellava ride. ^^


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From callistianstar on June 12, 2009
    Lovely! Oh goodness. I enjoyed this so very much. Jumping around here since this is technically a review to cover the last 20 or so chapters.

    I remember talking to my friend, Emily (Snarry writer) a few months ago about the different possibilities of when exactly Dumbledore would have known about Horcruxes and exactly when he would have realized Harry to be one. But this was definitely the worst of the scenarios. To think that Dumbledore already thought of Harry as a sacrifice as early as when he entered Hogwarts for the first time...or earlier. To see a Dumbledore who cared more for Seamus (if Severus's deductions were correct), when he hears of Harry's sufferings and deems them necessary... Very much an eye opener for Dumbledore's character. But I really like how you used that in such a way to develop Severus' character and to free Snape in a manner of speaking.

    And Severus... Such a delightful character in this story. I'm so glad that he was one of the main three POVs we got to experience. You did a fantastic job with him. I really like the development from caring for Lily, to just caring for Harry. Though it was amusing to read Harry's thoughts on that, such as that Snape would bring up Granger getting hurt by Finnigan, but really only caring about the fact that Finnigan hurt Harry back in the beginning of the story. All those things were rather cute, and that ending scene... :D I'm really glad that he punished the Dursleys only in a way to immediately punish them for future cruelty rather than to acquire the vengenance that Harry would so deeply disapprove of.

    Speaking of which, I adored Harry's frustration and notice of himself and how his thought process began changing probably due to his continuance association with Severus and Draco. How he'd be able to read Dumbledore as a fool, instead of sympathize with him on every occassion.

    Draco... So proud of that kid. lol. But honestly, I really loved that whole inventor's aspect, and how each character of the main trio affected the other in this story. That Snape and sometimes Harry was able to turnabout Draco's perceptions of what he could do, rather than just follow the Malfoy creed, that he could be an inventor that his father disapproved of him being. That was inspiring. I loved that. I am sorry that he came out of this war an orphan, but you did such an interesting job with these kids fighting the war in this way.

    One of the most intriguing things was having Harry say something to the effect of Dumbledore being a fool for trying to make Hogwarts the focal point of the war. It really didn't need to be. It was just conclusive to the other books to have it that way in the seventh, but as a whole, it didn't need to be, as this was a war for the sake of all the wizarding and muggle world--the whole world.

    Fantastic job. Harry and Draco's relationship was wonderful. One of the most beautiful things, after all they had been through, was definitely that they shared their grief together, and that Harry was able to make the claim that the guilt and horrible feelings virtual and surprisingly (for him) disappeared. That was a beautiful way to teach Harry that sharing his pain is not necessarily a weakness, and to teach him that that is how it should be.
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  • From AylaRouge on June 10, 2009
    I like how you know the passing of time because of the season and not because you told us the months. The closes thing you was at the beginning with Draco and the almost-year thing with the Headmaster. I love that Harry finally told Snape I love you and Snape said it back to him. I love that in this story, Snape has a chance at happiness. And lastly, I love that sex between Harry and Draco is light and happy and filled with laughter. I always thought that was how sex should be between two people who really love each other.

    Loved this story and it's going into my favourits, to be read over and over again to remind myself why I love this fandom so much. Thank you for this story, it's been amazing and wounderful.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on June 08, 2009
    *coos at the ending* Thank you so much for finding the time to write the epilogue for this wonderful story, although I almost wish you hadn't. I suppose this is goodbye for now, may your muses be plentiful and singing loudly in your ear!
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  • From Aline on June 08, 2009
    It was beautiful, I liked it very much :) You are a great author and one of my very favorites!
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  • From PanickedSerenity on June 08, 2009
    That was an amazing story. I love the ending so much!!! Your writing is superb. Thank you for all the hard work and dedication in writing such a brillant story!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 08, 2009
    I am sooooo going to miss this story! What an amazing adventure!!!
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  • From mrequecky on May 30, 2009
    Wow, loooved the updates!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 29, 2009
    about #39...

    A simple Slicing Spell.

    At least, that's more climatic than a wimpy expelliamus[sp?], which Rowling
    did in her book. She probably expects the movie that's coming will make HER
    wimpy ending appealing.

    NOW, I find it...disheartening that you had Narcissa die, considering she
    hadn't a chance to live her life the way she wanted to, now that she was free
    of Lucius' influence.

    ...and what will you do with Dumbledore?

    In the end, I was glad to be an ACTUAL witness to the ending of a story, sometimes
    I get distracted and miss everything.

    It's like needing to go to the bathroom, when a movie has five minutes left.

    Yes, I did use that comparison. :-)

    See you next story...
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  • From 4872luk on May 28, 2009
    Wow! I have just discovered and read this story in one day and am overwhelmed! Wow is really all I can think to say, partly because of the utter brilliance of the story and partly because it's 3am and I'm sleep deprived. I'll try to be more coherent when I review the epilogue! Can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 28, 2009
    I must say, this is one of the most realistic and satisfying endings to Voldemort that I have read not having occurred on the battlefield. Well done. Thank you for updating once again, I eagerly await the epilogue.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 27, 2009
    Soooo need the next chapter!!! HOLY MOLY!!! Voldemort is dead!!!
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