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Reviews for Inter Vivos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From serenagold on May 27, 2009
    Wow. I loved the Love/Hate back and forth of Harry's self analysis. I loved his well developed self realization.
    It really makes for a remarkable full circle of development for his character.

    Keep up the great work. Its sad to see that the story is almost over but exciting to see how it will end. Can't wait for the conclusion!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 27, 2009
    Wow. Well done. That was an intense chapter. Definitely well-written.
    I love how you had Harry go through an emotional spiral, only to end up with love inside him in conjunction with the acknowledgment of hate. I liked how you had Harry use a simple spell rather than the Killing Curse - more appropriate considering what Harry went through. And of course Draco and Severus are there beside Harry...that was a nice touch at the end.
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 27, 2009
    Beautiful death for Voldemort. I absolutely loved the internal battle between hate and love going on inside Harry. The experiences you chose him to remember were very powerful and convincing.

    Waiting breathlessly for the epilogue! ^^
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 25, 2009
    Well done. Thank you for writing part 1 of the final confrontation, I can't wait for part 2. Please post again when you are ready.
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  • From serenagold on May 25, 2009
    Wow. This chapter was crazy intense!!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 25, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 30 part 5!!! The fragment is heading for Sirius!!! Someone do something!!!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 24, 2009
    SO MUCH ACTION!

    I. Am. Dying

    I have to know what happens next! They're all dying! Please please don't let Ron or Snape die. God, I'm already crying.

    Well, exiting update all the same! The curse chanting and the fact that Hermione was brave enough to continue was so very intense.

    Please update soon! *Sobs*
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 24, 2009
    AHHHH!!!!!! Sirius duck! Snape do something!
    Holy crap! That was a crazy chapter. Narcissa died trying to kill the last Horcrux but that shard is heading straight for Sirius who might get possessed by it. Ron is dying from blood loss. Hermione and Draco are STILL going on with the ritual with Harry (they HAVE to anyway because fighting Moldy Voldy without the piece in Harry gone is pointless). And Severus is facing off with Voldie.
    Keep going! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 21, 2009
    Yeaaahh, the tension is mounting.

    I'm a little worried over Wormtail, will Voldemort find out about his life-debt? Well, of course you can't answer me that :P

    And your fears should be thrown into the dumpster, because have Draco and Harry acting perfectly like teenagers. Of course they did have to grow up fast, and you incorporated this into their characters too. Love it.

    By any chance, can you tell me how many chapters there are in the story? Thank you!

    I'll be on the look-out for the next update! ^^
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  • From SParker on May 21, 2009
    about 37...

    I dunno, with all this talk about soul switching, it sounds like SOMEthing might
    go wrong. Besides, at this point I think for the next few chapters I'll just
    sit back & read and see how you pull this off. :-)

    Lastly, I used to do that when it came to people's summary, if it didn't
    sound intriguing I bypassed it, now I just pay attention to how many reviews
    a story gets OR look at the ratings.

    Of course, ratings isn't everything, BUT if a story has at least 24+ reviews,
    I'll glance at the story and then judge for myself, if it's worth it as a leisurely past-time.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 21, 2009
    Snape in spy-mode is enjoyable to read, watching as he spins his weave around Wormtail. Great job!
    keep going!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 20, 2009
    Alright, so just yesterday I began to read 'Inter Vivos'.

    I.Could.Not.Stop.

    Not even for a minute.

    Too amazing for words. Really. This is hands down one of the best Harry/Draco fanfictions I have ever read. I love all your stories, I really really do. They always have exciting plot lines, really deep character portrayals and very powerful endings.

    Not to mention the sex is incredible.

    But this story...this one has got to rank as the highest, my most favorite, tied with 'Building with Worn-out tools' and the Frame of Mind series.

    I LOVE LOVE LOVE the fact that Snape plays such a big role in this one. The whole student-mentor relationship between him and Harry is so realistic and touching. Draco always stands out as my favorite.

    This is a work of art. I need not exaggerate, or suck up.

    Please please update soon! ^^ FANTASTICLY well-written.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 20, 2009
    Great chapter! Intriguing thought about the life-debt.
    That was an awesome scene with the Elder Wand-Draco showdown, very cool. I really do love your Draco, a much better version than canon!Draco who appears only as a scared little boy who got in over his head but I digress.
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 19, 2009
    Thank you for updating once more, you've done an excellent job as usual.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 18, 2009
    about #36...

    Well, I need to wrap my pretty lil head around that a couple o' times, but
    I get the gest of it.

    Off the subject:

    Not sure if I asked this before, but as an author do you try to avoid reading
    other fanfictions to keep from extracting ideas OR do you try to see what's
    going on, to get an idea and not wind up doing the same thing that the other
    person is doing.

    Just curious...
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