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Reviews for Inter Vivos

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 07, 2009
    Harry and his brash nature..............Thank you for posting once more, as always I highly enjoyed reading it. Please update again when convenient. Also I'm not sure if I have said this previously, but thank you for responding to the reviews, it is good to know that you are actually reading these.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 07, 2009
    OMG!!! What is Harry thinking????? I soooo need chapter 30!!!
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  • From serenagold on May 05, 2009
    Yikes. Voldemorte's enlisting psychological torture! O_O (Through the murder of others, so I guess its win-win for him, eh?)

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 05, 2009
    Soooo need more! Poor Harry!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 04, 2009
    Nicely done. The detail with the organ in the box was a nice touch, as a reader of this fic, you tend to forget among the more 'fluffy parts' that in reality these characters are in an intense and life threatening situation. A situation in which (with the exception of a few), that a group of adolescents are up against an adversary who is an insane lunitic. Thank you for updating.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 04, 2009
    UGH! That whole heart business grossed me out... but I supposed that was the intent. Poor Dennis... old Voldie's such a monster.
    Keep going!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 04, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 29 part 2!!!!
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  • From serenagold on May 01, 2009
    Excellent pair of chapters.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 29, 2009
    Excellent job. You were especially detailed on the scenes focusing on the various gestures between the characters signifying different thought patterns, ideas, and agreements. Thank you for finding the time to post, please do so again when you have the time.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 29, 2009
    I loved those last 2 lines: "Harry would do what was right, what was admirable, what was brave and heroic. They would do what was necessary." That basically sums up Harry, Draco and Severus' roles pretty well.
    Harry's explanation was really heartfelt. I mean, how many times have you've wanted people to believe something about you and that didn't happen for a long time? Countless, really.
    Great chapter!


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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 29, 2009
    about #31...

    You know, I think it's safe for me to say that I TRULY do like the characterization
    of Ron Weasley when he's not the close-minded individual that some fiction portray
    him to be. Even though, he & Draco have been at odds at school, I like to think
    he CAN be lenient and move pettiness aside to do what needs to be done.

    Also, I, TOO, can see Ron as a strategist [or soldier as you called him], since he does well at Wizards Chess, I'd like to see him go against Snape. :-)

    For some odd ball reason, while Draco was trying to convince Harry the importance
    of....killing ''Finnegan''. I couldn't help BUT think of Sailor Moon...yes, that
    is before your time.

    Anyway, it's the common story of the gentle warrior who wants to help EVERYone
    when others see no other solution but one.

    So, I guess the Slytherins have been elected in doing the unsavory work...with
    a Gryffindor mixed in.

    All in all, still patiently waiting for THE confrontation between Ole' Snake Eyes
    & the Lion's Pride.

    nuff said...
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  • From ANON - DTDY on April 29, 2009
    Ahh harry and his feelings... so noble so sad.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 25, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 29!!! Is Draco correct?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 25, 2009
    about #30...

    After getting this far into the story, I have to admit...I like the way you
    write, because it DOES remind me of simply reading a novel and not just
    fanfiction.

    You truly put an effort to do something different and that can be hard, but
    you do it in a way that looks effortlessly, when I know you must go through
    some headaches to stay ahead of the game to try to think of new ideas OR take
    something old and make it new.

    Which makes me wonder have you played with the idea of a crossover, yet?

    Also, are you considering writing as a profession?


    PS-I tried not to bombard you with TOO 'out-of-the-blue' questions...and
    'demands'. :-)
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  • From Claushiru on April 25, 2009
    Yahoooo! I loved your rewriting of the books since chapter 1, and it keeps getting better and better. Your inventive way of twisting the original story while keeping it smart and mindful of each characters personae and progress is really impressive. I can't help but wish for the next chapter to be posted each time I check in on AFF. And I can't wait to see what way Draco has found to pull the horcruxe out of Harry. An advice though : when he does reveal his plan, if you could explain in a little more details what's going on on the magical level? That would really help! :D

    You write so beautifully and I'm going to read your story until the end!
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