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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From alleycat88 on April 02, 2009
    WOOT! More pieces of the puzzle coming together. I can't wait for more!
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  • From AylaRouge on April 02, 2009
    Agreed. Draco is good for making Harry take a break. And Harry needs those because if you can't think clearly then you're no good to work and not having breaks (or sleeping well) will go that to you. So I really like that ^^ I also like how fast Harry found out about the tiara at Hogwarts. Goes back to what I said before, this group they have is much better then that in the seventh book.

    Great chapter!! Hoping to read the next one soon ^^
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 02, 2009
    What a major bridge to cross! I sooooo need chapter 27!!! Will Harry go get the tiara or will he send Hermione and Ron for it?
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  • From NyaleIshamba on March 31, 2009
    I just read your entire story in two days. It's really good!! I love how detailed the plot it. I think how you put Severus, Mrs. Malfloy, Harry, and Draco together as a group was a really good. It certainly seems like this story will get even better.
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  • From ANON - Tree on March 30, 2009
    OH DAMN! Flippin' awesome, action-packed chapter. I knew Dumbledore was up to something...but I was not expecting THAT! Oh man, where are they gonna go now? So stoked for next chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 30, 2009
    OMG!!! I sooo need chapter 26!!! Dumbledore attacked them! They're leaving Hogwarts! Holy moly!!!
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  • From serenagold on March 30, 2009
    When I think of Draco's kiss of Harry on the stairs, I picture that famous post-war picture of the sailor and his girl. =^^=

    Also, I think you're probably right about Dumbledore and why he went and got himself poisoned in the first place. He probably went and did put on the ring to communicate with ghosts. Idiot.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 30, 2009
    Fantastic job! Please continue to update when possible.
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  • From Vibora on March 30, 2009
    ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!ohmygosh!
    8D
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  • From rafiq on March 30, 2009
    That was a great chapter. I'm so glad you brought Narcissa into this story and made her so strong.
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on March 30, 2009
    good god bout time we got rid of that old fool....gee...and THANKS for giving us detales of what harry and draco are doing to disgust snape...THANKS alot
    -_- lol hurry and update!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 30, 2009
    What an action-packed chapter! The best yet!
    I'm so glad that Snape's back to his normal snarky self again.
    What are they going to do with Bellatrix now? I can't see Harry letting them kill her, she can't go back to Azkaban since she''l just break out again, and Dumbledore's out of the question now.
    I loved how you wrote the-break-with-Dumbledore scene. And I cannot wait to see what happens next.
    Great job! Keep going!
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  • From AylaRouge on March 30, 2009
    Holy shit. That was...holy shit O.O

    Yes I do like how you have both HBP and DH going on here and how Harry left school and (I bet) wont be back for his seventh year. I love the Snape, Narcissa and Draco are the ones helping Harry and not Ron and Hermione. No matter how smart Hermione is or how brave Ron is, they wouldn't be able to help Harry in a ways Snape, Narcissa and Draco can. And even though in DH they won the war, I know that things wouldn't have gotten as bad as they did in the book with Harry had more people to help him then just two seventeen year olds who never finished their schooling. Having a death eater and a wife of a death eater is good for Harry. He'll have information on Tom that he wouldn't have before and with Draco there, Harry has a stronger reason to fight. And Draco, knowing the dark arts as he dose, is better then Ron or Hermione.

    LOL, as you can see, I have problems with DH. I really can't wait for the rest of this story. I'm very excited for what you do from here on out. And how you have Harry win the war (please win the war...and please let there be a happy ending).
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 28, 2009
    about #24...

    1. Well, it's official, you are DEFINITELY getting better at the action-packed
    scenes in your stories as time goes on. Maybe one day you'll bite the bullet and
    see how well you do in a story based on humor...or something involving Quidditch. :-)

    2. Being a reader who relies heavily on description in a story so I can get a
    visual...in my head. At this point in the story, would Harry be 16 now? Plus,
    how tall would he be in your story compared to Draco?

    3. You know, Narcissa seems a little TOO calm for someone who almost got blown to
    bits, I would have at least been a wee bit miffed.
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  • From AylaRouge on March 27, 2009
    I knew it was Bella!! I knew she was the one making Snape afraid so much!! And I bet anything that Bella (and Snape but I know he's not evil so I'm not going to add him on here) is going to AK Harry but instead of killing Harry Bella kills the Horcrux in Harry. Yes, that's what I think will happen.

    and I like how you have Snape running threw Hogwarts this time like he did in the book.
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