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By : Dazzlious
  • From AlabasterPrincess on March 24, 2009
    aww, a very sweet chapter. I agree about happy endings. it's not that I can't write sad ones, I could write a real tear-jerker, its just that I feel cruel doing that to poor Severus, he deserves a happy end!
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on March 05, 2009
    Hurray!!!! Free and together at last. I wonder how Charlotte's classmates will treat her now they know about her marriage? And something tells me Lucius isn't going to let them get off so easily.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on February 21, 2009
    Great new chapter. I wonder how they'll cope in Azkaban. Still at least they'll be together. keep up the good work.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on February 14, 2009
    Loving this story, can't wait for updates!! X
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  • From PensievePerson on January 03, 2009
    OOh...I am enjoying this. Excellent idea to put pairings squaring off against each other...especially when it's Snape and Lucius! I thought the best in character thing about Lucius thus far, is telling Amber, her friend Charlotte is weird for picking him...I could so see that happening cause Lucius's ego is rattled. I also bet Lucius is brainwashing Amber to not be friends with Charlotte anymore. This is a good story and I do believe the Dark Lord actually did supply women for his Death Eaters! The comment Charlotte made about Lucius being less than a man is going to put her in trouble when Lucius hears of it. I am looking forward to Severus and Charlotte's time together in the weekend. I was wondering if you could put spanking in this? I'll admit I'm a little crazy about that. Looking forward to more! And also, if your interested and read any of my stories, let me know....
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