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Reviews for Your Hand in Marriage

By : ladyoferos
  • From ginnylovesharry07 on January 02, 2009
    totally good chapter, update soon. enjoying the story.
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 02, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From voraciousreader on January 01, 2009
    Wow! Just...Wow!
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  • From ApollinaV on January 01, 2009
    The plot twists with Lucius were interesting, but I hope to see Draco's reaction. Not only is he unaware of Hermione's ancestry, but he was floated as a potential husband. I wonder if he would have wanted her. I wonder if he views Severus as a threat to her.
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    now what an interesting turn of events hermine is related to lucius and draco hmmm... so what is draco going to think of this that should be interesting... great chap... i like how you have thrown the malfoys into this!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    oh wow that was tough... i was wondering if severus felt her distress it got pretty hairy there... i wonder what he is making of her emotional state after she dissolved into tears... i am sure he will handle ron soon
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    OMG now that was hot and the shared connection they have made it that much more hot!!!!! great job....
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    well that is a nice little twist severus is going to feel what it is like to give birth holy crap well i think he will respect hermione in a WHOLE new light after that... and i like that he is already protective of her
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    so they just eloped this is going to be an interesting development
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    i really liked this chap.... so she is merlins last living relative hmmm that is interesting and they are each others soulmate... albus is funny... 'if i were 100 years youngr...' ha ha.... ok so why do i have a feeling hat the rings enchantments are going to come in handy!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 01, 2009
    nice start i love ss/hg and esp marriage law fics... great job!!!! i like that you have severus confused here at the end and i am really interested in knowing hermiones heritage
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  • From neelix on January 01, 2009
    This is getting murky but I am really enjoying it!
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 31, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From wishyouwere on December 31, 2008
    Again, I am really enjoying this story. The twist with Lucius was completely unexpected yet totally works with his 'I am totally looking out for myself' attitude. One thing though, if Severus feels pain when he is summoned, would Hermione feel it too? Any time that you want to heat things up between to two of them, feel free - hahaha!
    If you edit your own work, great job! If you have a beta, please pass on my compliments. It is so much more enjoyable to read a story with correct spelling and proper grammar.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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