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Reviews for Your Hand in Marriage

By : ladyoferos
  • From ApollinaV on December 27, 2008
    Chapter 4-
    Oooh, Can I be thrown over his shoulder? He can carry me down into the dungeons like a caveman any day.

    Stand strong. It's your story. If others don't like that she's not muggleborn, well, they're entitled to their opinion, but they're not writing it. I'd hate to think you'd let your story get hijacked. Your plot line seems to revolve around the Merlin ancestry, so there's a method to the madness.
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  • From ApollinaV on December 27, 2008
    Chapter 3-
    I'm not entirely certain why Dumbledore actually supports this marriage. Or how Voldmort and SS's spy status will hold up under scruitny. I'm sure sure it'll all be explained, but it's so rushed and hasty.

    Another good cliffie with Dumbledore's comment of this complicating things. Oh I hope Severus' hair goes back to being black. SS with whitish Malfoy hair...ugh. Wrong on so many levels. Make it all better!

    Guess I just have to trust the author.
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  • From ApollinaV on December 27, 2008
    Chapter 2-
    I love his 'polite indifference' while he's struggling to maintain composure inside. Very cute.

    Merlin connection was interesting. Didn't see that one coming.
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  • From mamabear52 on December 27, 2008
    Love it, love it, keep going, you have our utmost attention for the rest of this story. By the way, just out of curiosity, any idea how many chappies we can expect ?? I just love MLCs, even after DH`s horrid ending. (Get the feeling I am a Snape fan ?)
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  • From ApollinaV on December 27, 2008
    Chapter 1-
    I love that he ran back to his rooms to hide.

    Ok I'm hooked. Though to be fair, you didn't have to do much to hook me on a MLC. Simply going through the names on the roster was enough. Too funny.

    Guess as to her 'secret' identity? Not the child of Dentists? Hm... so long as she's not the love child of Voldemort and Celistine Warbeck I'm good. Oh, and not another member of a royal family...plz!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 27, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From voraciousreader on December 27, 2008
    Oooh, you certainly live up to your name!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 27, 2008
    can't wait for more.
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  • From Tenar10r on December 27, 2008
    Wowsers! I just got through Chapter 2 and am finding this story completely delightful!
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  • From CarlaRush on December 27, 2008
    Very nice...I'm looking forward to updates.

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  • From vampgrl23 on December 27, 2008
    Oh my gosh!!! You have to update soon!!!!!
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 27, 2008
    Excellent start
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  • From shelagh on December 27, 2008
    Execellent work
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 27, 2008
    This is great. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 27, 2008
    looks good, can't wait for more.
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