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Reviews for Take Your Bloody Traditions And--

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on August 19, 2015
    I dont get you, how do you write so many awsome stories and so many at a time?
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  • From ANON - LadyID on November 01, 2009
    I really like how you handled the break up with Ginny in this story. It made sense and wasn't all at once. It's so hard to find someone who can balance it like you did. Also, I absolutely adore seductive Draco, he's my favorite kind of Draco and you did him so well!
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  • From fairietayle on August 18, 2009
    Perfect ending to a pretty bloody perfect fic; the last line ("Let's fly") made me squeel! *-* I love the idea, the way you interweaved the wedding preparations and Draco's courting presents together, and the originality and creativity of the gifts (the white winged cat-thingie was positively delightful! I want one for myself!). I also love how IC Draco and Harry are - and if not exactly IC then at least the way I like them to be ;)
    But Ginny, I'm so dissapointed in her! Still planning to marry Harry when she's clearly in love with someone else (... I guess she would have left Harry at the altar? Surely she wouldn't have gotten married and then had an affair with her love? Or would she just have lived in misery? o.0 ). What was that chit thinking? And I can't understand why Harry wasn't upset at Ginny for letting the farce go on and complicate both their lives.
    I'm not saying that I'm dissapointed in the way you wrote the characters - heaven's no! I'm just letting you know that your writing has caused emotions in me ;) Ginny positively made my blood boil! xD

    Hmm, once again, an amazing job!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 10, 2009
    about the story...

    Now, THIS is a one shot that I enjoyed MORE than any one shot you've done recently.

    The idea of Courting is something old-fashioned & hardly done in todays society, so
    it is appealing, especially for me who IS old-fashioned to the bottom of mah' heart!

    What I really...REALLY...enjoyed about the story is the Night Ride between Harry &
    Draco. It's reminiscent of the Quidditch scene I was trying to impress upon you to
    write in a future story someday. You know, where Slytherin is fed up from losing
    to Gryffindor so Draco decides to incorporate moves from various sports.

    Anyway, that's still a fantasy of mine.

    Sooo, since I know you don't do shout-outs in one shots, I'll catch you later in
    another story.


    PS- you must of been a 'one shot writing fool' because this is the THIRD one I've
    missed within 3 weeks.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 24, 2009
    I absolutely LOVED this story. Especially the ending. It was gorgeous! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on February 16, 2009
    That was absolutely stunning. I expect nothing less from one of my favorite authors. This story was beautifully written and flowed naturally. Thank you for sharing, and as always; I hope to read more stories from you.
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on December 31, 2008
    as always...perfect in every which way.....heh, very very good write another one lol!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 31, 2008
    I haven't read everything you've written, but I've read a fair amount of your stuff, and this is one of your best. When I first saw that it was 20K was like...eh...that's long as shit, but I quickly got sucked into Harry's dilemma and Draco's efforts to Court him. This was just so authentically told and so well written. I know you say it's very fluffy, but it didn't feel that way to me. I hate super fluff, and this just felt like real romance, plausible, wonderfully uncertain and spellbounding. I loved every minute of it. And I'm so so happy that Ginny played a role in helping Draco, the ending where she cries out in relief at his admission had me crying with her and him. Really excellent, thank you for sharing it.
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  • From alleycat88 on December 31, 2008
    Another brilliant oneshot love! Thank you!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 31, 2008
    DAMN! that was wicked! totally cool! will there be a sequel? please say yes!
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  • From TCardan on December 31, 2008
    I absolutely loved your story! You have a good writing style and your portrayal of Draco was different and exciting.

    Well done!
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 31, 2008
    I sooooooo loved this!!!
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  • From callistianstar on December 30, 2008
    This was so wonderful! Though some things were expected, and meant to be that way, you still managed to have me wide-eyed, incredulous over the proceedings. Such as with Ginny, whom it was easy to assume she was growing weary and liked someone else, but then you come out with Goyle. And then that last thing. Goodness. When I read "stark naked" I could have died. I couldn't laugh, I was just struck dumb.

    The gifts were awesomely described. I do like the effects of the cloak, much better than I could have imagined an enchanted cloak to be like. The ring, Harry gave (the strand of hair was sweet) was too fantabulous. I love Harry.

    Although this was well over what a one-shot would normally be, I do wish I could have seen Mrs. Weasley awaken or recover, but I do understand that that would be something she needs time for. While one would figure that she would force the wedding on Harry and Ginny out of grief and tiredness from the war, I found it interesting and good that you made no mention that Harry thought she was just trying to use the wedding as a distraction and hope for normalness.

    This was entirely adorable. I enjoyed this immensely. Wonderful peice.
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  • From ANON - Ann on December 30, 2008
    Another excellent piece of writing. I love all the intense emotions you put into a story. Loved it.
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  • From vanessaclarke on December 30, 2008
    Absolutely brilliant! Great pace and nicely thought out. I love the open-ended quality. I'm still not quite sure why Draco would suddenly up and decide to court Harry but I think Harry's thoughts and reactions to it and to the wedding were bang on. It seems so like Harry to build his life around pleasing everyone else. Of course I saw Ginny's little affair coming a mile away but I would probably hesitate to cross a mother like that too if I thought I could get away with having someone else do it for me. (Mrs. Weasley was utter perfection by the way.) And just when I was feeling a bit 'ho hum' about the obviousness of it, you went and made Gregory Goyle the object of her affections. Hah! That's awesome! Draco's final dramatic gesture was not what I was expecting either. I think you made him a bit flaky in this but it's sort of endearing. Anyway, fabulous job over all! Two enthusiastic thumbs up.
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