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Reviews for A Way to Celebrate The New Years

By : OrgyXIIIBike
  • From Persy on March 10, 2022

    Nice and hot lil fic there...


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  • From ANON - TashaRose on August 16, 2009
    Enjoyable one shot.
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  • From Clare1984 on January 02, 2009
    ok, seeing as you asked so nicely - omg, this story was amazing! *faints*

    I love naughty little ficlets like this and my imagination is running wild about what could happen Hermione and Severus after this. Of course, my imagination always runs wild where Severus Snape/Alan Rickman is concerned.

    Anyhoo, awesome oneshot, well done!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 02, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on January 02, 2009
    Uh-huh...interesting. You really should have fit all of that into the story someplace before the end. After all, even though you say the story seemed to end perfectly at their climax (and I concur), you continued the story after that. I still liked it for a little fickie it was rather good. Thanks much!
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  • From nastygrl on January 01, 2009
    Good job!!!! :D
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  • From shelagh on January 01, 2009
    Very good
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  • From ANON - WhisperingAngel on January 01, 2009
    I love this fic.. The way Severus is direct and impatient is kinda how I see his character to be.. Not beating about the bush although quiet and 100% slytherin in the way he goes about it... What a way to start the year....
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  • From MissLibrarian on January 01, 2009
    That was short and very sweet indeed! Great stuff. Thank you for the story and a Happy New Year ~ Marie.
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  • From ApollinaV on January 01, 2009
    I understand it was meant to be a short PWP, but I would have liked to have seen some explaination as to why she jumped in bed with Severus Snape, sexual predator. He just sorta tells her he's going to fuck her and orders her to prepare a room and she just runs off to do just that. One sentence thrown in telling the reader why would have not been amiss. I read this and thought, 'Wow, what a big whore she is. She'll just drop into bed as ordered with anybody' because I had no reason to know why she was willing to sleep with him. Also there was a sentence that stuck out oddly. "No one new?" Not bad for something this short. You write an intriguing coarse, dominant, and demanding Severus which is a very good thing in my book.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on January 01, 2009
    good short
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  • From dreamer24 on January 01, 2009
    That was a great way to celebrate New Year's... too bad the rest of us aren't as lucky as Hermione and do not have the delicious Potions master to occupy our holiday.
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  • From tairensoul on January 01, 2009
    It wasn't terrible but it could use some work. The sentences are a bit choppy and you don't need to keep using their personal names in each sentence. Also, go through and make sure all of the sentences are in past tense. Third, in the part "as deep could he go". you need to stick "as" in between deep and could. Also, the story just cuts off. We as the readers don't know what happens after they climax. Write a bit of post-coital story, such as, 'After climaxing, Severus rolled off of Hermione and pulled her close to him. He kissed the top of her head and whispered, "You were amazing love." Hermione nodded sleepily and closed her eyes, resting her head on Severus' chest. "Sleep dear," Severus said, closing his eyes, "no one is going to miss us." They were found later by an inebriated Draco who smirked and turned to his lover. "You owe me." Harry scowled and dragged Draco to their room, to pay his debt.'
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